Good morning/afternoon/whatever time it is wherever you are, owner Mattokki here!

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Title: 
         You chose a brilliant title, since it's such a unique title and it automatically attracts attention. I have never seen any titles quite like yours, and it fits your story well.

Grade: 10/10

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Description/ Foreword: 
                                     Despite the length of your description, it was very revealing. I could pick up the whole plot from just reading it, and the point of a description is to summmarise your story without giving everything away. 

It would've been better if you just put up the part about The Colours of Love, and that's just about everything you need, the other parts seemed very uunnecessary

Grade: 4/10

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Grammar: 
                The grammar in this story was not the best. The most common mistake that I picked up on were tense-switches between past- and present tense. Practice writing in only one tense and stick to that tense, whether it is past or present.

Your sentence structure, on the other hand, was perfect, it was just that a few sentence were very clumsy and didn't flow well together. Try joining two appropriate sentences using a comma, or whatever you feel is necessary.

Grade: 5/10

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Spelling: 
              Your speling was near-perfect, the few mistakes that I did see linked directly to incorrect use of tense. However, o