Let Go

Description

“Do not call him.
Fall asleep to the hum of the VCR.
She must make him happy.
She must be
She must be his favorite place in Minneapolis.
You are a souvenir shop, where he goes
to remember how much people miss him
when he is gone.”

Sierra DeMulder - Unrequited Love Poem

Foreword

“I love you” Eli whispered in his ear.

“D-Don’t say that” Even if it delighted him hear those words, he knew that when Eli get up and left they will hurt him, nailing onto his heart like knives.

“Wh-Why?”

“You have someone that hears that every day already.”

 

 

 

Hi~
I was threatened with polar bear by my dear friend Ruby if I didn’t post something soon >_<
So here is a new story. But I don’t know when I’m going to update.
Also, I want to say something about this oneshot.
In this story Eli will be one year older than Kiseop, same with AJ.
Kevin on the other hand will be younger for a couple of months, like he is in real life.

I hope you’ll like it.

See you~

Author's Thoughts
Yukki5
There is not new chapter yet. I was proofreading and editing the two previous chapters I had posted from my phone. Sorry for that.
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remand_a #1
Chapter 5: Please write a sequel for this story. I love it n this is like cliffhanger ;-;
Naeyan #2
Chapter 5: It is a great story, I really liked reading it. I'm a little sad it ended already, are you going to do a sequel? It will be awesome! I wants a happy Kiseop!
inbetweenElseop #3
forgot to add how much I loved that you had Eli confess all his feelings and not hide or make up a different story or person. Showed how he truly loved Kiseop deep inside (no ert thinking here) & thus why I wouldn't mind seeing them happy^^

ok done rambling XD
inbetweenElseop #4
Chapter 5: I kept getting sadder with no hope of an Elseop reunion as the side scrollbar kept reaching the end and no Eli. so sad that what I kept imagining didn't happen, but as much as I hate to say it, at this point Eli didn't deserve Kiseop. Now if you decide to reunite them in Japan after a break, then lets have a happy ending ^_~

Beautiful, y, emotional, story that I plan to re-read.
Rubyllious #5
Chapter 5: *wipes away tears of joy* this is so beautiful :') just what I expected as an ending :') *huggles*
(If Alex is reacting like that, I wonder how she will react to Amnesia's ending ^u^'''')

I see that you couldn't help your vinseop feels~ *smirks* at least Jaeseop was mature enough to not punch Eli in the face the second he laid eyes on him

And my baby Seop.... Always blaming himself for what happened and asking Eli to not feel guilty.... Y___Y

It would be awesome to have a sequel to this where elseop meet *-* which actually reminds me a lot of Hello My Ex xD

Haaa, I will miss this story, thank you for the awesome job baby!
TheAngryKimchi #6
Chapter 5: WHAT KIND OF ENDING IS THIS DANIELA?!?!
/(0.0)\

No...nononononono this isn't the end right? Not the end...no...n- *starts sobbing*
perfectxinsanity #7
Chapter 5: I'm sad now >~>
This was a great story.
And I'm so angry with Eli, taking his time and stuff Dx
And the flashback at the end *sobs*
ellisana #8
Chapter 5: Awww, stupid Eli why didn't you call sooner! Authornim, can't you make a sequel? I want ElSeop together! T.T
StillMeadows #9
Chapter 5: Stupid pigeon. You stupid, stupid pigeon.
You.... *throws things off her desk* *starts throwing things at Eli*
YOU STUPID PAJARO.
HOW COULD YOU?
STUPID PIGEON.
YOU STUPID, STUPID PIGEON.
*has currently run out of vocabulary words*
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

That was a good ending but it was sad. TTTTTTT
I'm gonna pretend something happened and they started seeing each other again. TTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
StillMeadows #10
Chapter 4: I didn't know AFF would eat my comment so I'm commenting again. :P

OMG all the tension and drama lahdjdgjshsjdgdjdh
And the 2seop part <333
Eli you idiot! Why are you so dense?!
And if Eli only has two days... Kiseop is planning to go to the university in Japan, isn't he? TTTTTTTT
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