소녀 (Sonyeo)

Description

Kaylie Rollins-Yang

 

Yang Seungho

 

MBLAQ- Seungho, GO, Joon, Cheundong, and Mir

 

Yang Seunghoon

 

Yang Yoseob

 

Catherine Rollins

 

Kono, Chinho, Steve and Danny

 

Gracie

 

Grover

 

 

Foreword

So I had this dream about Seungho and Hawaii Five-O and so i decided to write it. I don't have a description yet because i kinda want the story to be a surprise~ but i'm going to try to make it a many chaptered story and there will be action in it and their will be many more characters added as the story goes~

poster made by XOXO University poster shops ilhoongirl thank you so much I seriously love it!

I am currently editing to make it better and longer and i will mark the chapters with a * when it's updated and new. i want to make it better and have more feeling and description to it and i hope it will be to you guys liking and please do comment and tell me what you like and don't like

kiss_xander23
I will be rewriting this story starting tomorrow 5-16-2014

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 2: I like this new beginning of the story. It fits well together, and I feel sorry for Kaylie. Poor girl:(.
DeeDee101
#2
Chapter 3: Hmmmmmm...Five O- it reminds me on F4 kinda xD but I like this chapter I liked how you portrayed her feelings while she was in the car arriving to Yang's family house. So you did great job.
DeeDee101
#3
Chapter 1: I like your writing style its kind of unique now back on chapter I like your OC I think she have unique personality...Hopefully you will update more of this :D
DeeDee101
#4
The poster looks okay but I would suggest you a better one becausde this one kinda looks croweded but its fine I like the plot! :D
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 5: I love the mystery and intrigue that this story provides. Nice update<3.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 3: Oh, no! Something happened to her sister. I hope she wasn't killed, but this doesn't sound good...
DGNA_Forever
#7
Chapter 2: Aw! They got married and had kids. I like where this story is going.
DGNA_Forever
#8
Chapter 1: Poor Kaylie. Her father should be happy that she looks like her mother, instead of blaming her and making her feel bad. Seungho seems nice and I like your characters. Good job!
DGNA_Forever
#9
I think this looks interesting, so far=).