Chapter 2: I like this new beginning of the story. It fits well together, and I feel sorry for Kaylie. Poor girl:(.

Chapter 3: Hmmmmmm...Five O- it reminds me on F4 kinda xD but I like this chapter I liked how you portrayed her feelings while she was in the car arriving to Yang's family house. So you did great job.

Chapter 1: I like your writing style its kind of unique now back on chapter I like your OC I think she have unique personality...Hopefully you will update more of this :D

The poster looks okay but I would suggest you a better one becausde this one kinda looks croweded but its fine I like the plot! :D

Chapter 5: I love the mystery and intrigue that this story provides. Nice update<3.

Chapter 3: Oh, no! Something happened to her sister. I hope she wasn't killed, but this doesn't sound good...

Chapter 2: Aw! They got married and had kids. I like where this story is going.

Chapter 1: Poor Kaylie. Her father should be happy that she looks like her mother, instead of blaming her and making her feel bad. Seungho seems nice and I like your characters. Good job!

I think this looks interesting, so far=).