sixth day of school

love

The first day when myungsoo picked up jiyeon he started to pick her up more.Then people said if you want to be friends break up with myungsoo.''no.'' said jiyeon.While jiyeon was going to lunch she saw him with hyomin and they huged.Then he opened his eyes and saw her then she ran away and he chased her until he caught her.Then people started chasing them and then he said run.So they ran until they got home.But he lefted his car at school so she let him sleep over on the couch.Then they woke up and got dressed.But hyomin came and took myungsoo.So he though she went to school but she went home.But he was looking all around the school but she wasnt there.When school was over he went to her house.Then she told him shes moving.She alsoed said.''I know you still love hyomin.''images?q=tbn:ANd9GcT-QXneohUBWquON3sGGF6

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jessica_xiong
#1
Well you cant tell me how to write my story.
If i want to write it like that then i will.
But im not because its my story not yours.
Song_Dae
#2
Chapter 16: TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO , I agree !!! My HyoSoo/MyungMin feels !!!
TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #3
Chapter 16: NO~!!!!! My Hyomi can't fall in love with SungJong or Lee Joon !!! :'( *sigh* if only Hyomin were to get severely injured and almost die like in Day By Day ......
jessica_xiong
#4
ok ill do that
amelia_mega617 #5
can you add more tag name character in foreword so people would read it if have many characters.
jessica_xiong
#6
and ill make the story with more drama
jessica_xiong
#7
thanks and ok ill do that.
TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #8
By the way I love your poster !!!
TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #9
Chapter 14: Ohy my !!! No one even cared about my Minni !!! You should make the fight more dramatic like someone hurts Hyomin and Myungsoo helps her . You should put more HyoSoo/MyungMin in the story instead of just Myungyeon scenes . Make it , Dramatic !!!

P.S.

Man is Zinni_Kim still helping you ? Why jsnt she updating for me ?!
Song_Dae
#10
Chapter 13: Ya ya ya !!! You should put more Hyomin in the story with MyungSoo Jiyeon and Yerim . More drama . Even though Hyomin is my bias , you should make her a bigger b**** and then make her start a fight like beat up girls . More drama like this and your story will be a big hit !!! Please do it !!!