First day of school

When jiyeon was sleeping she woke up because it was the first day of school for her.While she was going to school she meet a girl named ori.So jiyeon said hi.But she icnored her.When jiyeon got to her class room everybody was waiting for the boy group.But one of the members noticed a new student.Then jiyeon intrdoced her self to the class.

After shw was finished with that class she went to lunch then they went to her and wore bulling her.Then myungsoo said for them to stop.

Infinite:Why go u like her?asked infinite.No its because shes new.Then jiyeon left to go to her next class music and there group went there to.So she walked in and saw him playing the gruitr.Then he asked.'Do you want to try.''Then she noded her head.Then he gave her his gruitr.Then he started to show her how to play.

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jessica_xiong #1 Mar 26, 2014 14:14:17

Well you cant tell me how to write my story.
If i want to write it like that then i will.
But im not because its my story not yours.

Song_Dae #2 Mar 26, 2014 07:00:35

Chapter 16: TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO , I agree !!! My HyoSoo/MyungMin feels !!!

TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #3 Mar 26, 2014 06:59:21

Chapter 16: NO~!!!!! My Hyomi can't fall in love with SungJong or Lee Joon !!! :'( *sigh* if only Hyomin were to get severely injured and almost die like in Day By Day ......

jessica_xiong #4 Mar 25, 2014 14:32:34

ok ill do that

amelia_mega617 #5 Mar 25, 2014 13:40:27

can you add more tag name character in foreword so people would read it if have many characters.

jessica_xiong #6 Mar 25, 2014 12:45:55

and ill make the story with more drama

jessica_xiong #7 Mar 25, 2014 12:43:22

thanks and ok ill do that.

TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #8 Mar 25, 2014 07:14:21

By the way I love your poster !!!

TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #9 Mar 25, 2014 07:10:54

Chapter 14: Ohy my !!! No one even cared about my Minni !!! You should make the fight more dramatic like someone hurts Hyomin and Myungsoo helps her . You should put more HyoSoo/MyungMin in the story instead of just Myungyeon scenes . Make it , Dramatic !!!

P.S.

Man is Zinni_Kim still helping you ? Why jsnt she updating for me ?!

Song_Dae #10 Mar 24, 2014 23:50:10

Chapter 13: Ya ya ya !!! You should put more Hyomin in the story with MyungSoo Jiyeon and Yerim . More drama . Even though Hyomin is my bias , you should make her a bigger b**** and then make her start a fight like beat up girls . More drama like this and your story will be a big hit !!! Please do it !!!