fourth day of school

love

Jiyeon woke up and went to school.Then she went to her class and tried to talk to myungsoo but he slapped her and jiyeon ran out of the class.Then myungsoo ran after her but he losted her.Then he yelled her name JIYEON!But she didnt come out until he went back to class. Then she came back in but it was time to go to lunch.So she went to lunch and ate.When it was the end of the day she went home but she didnt know that he followed her.So when she woke up her parents said.''Jiyeon theres a guy waiting for you.So she got dressed and she got in his car and people saw her in his car.When she got of the car people were taking picuters.But she couldn't get out so he graved her hand and he took her in the class room and hyomin saw that he was holding her hand.Then he let go of her hand then they sat down.Then she went to lunch.Then went to music and myungsoo was there and he was talking to her.myungsoo.gif~c200

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jessica_xiong
#1
Well you cant tell me how to write my story.
If i want to write it like that then i will.
But im not because its my story not yours.
Song_Dae
#2
Chapter 16: TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO , I agree !!! My HyoSoo/MyungMin feels !!!
TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #3
Chapter 16: NO~!!!!! My Hyomi can't fall in love with SungJong or Lee Joon !!! :'( *sigh* if only Hyomin were to get severely injured and almost die like in Day By Day ......
jessica_xiong
#4
ok ill do that
amelia_mega617 #5
can you add more tag name character in foreword so people would read it if have many characters.
jessica_xiong
#6
and ill make the story with more drama
jessica_xiong
#7
thanks and ok ill do that.
TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #8
By the way I love your poster !!!
TOTOMATOSHISHIMATO #9
Chapter 14: Ohy my !!! No one even cared about my Minni !!! You should make the fight more dramatic like someone hurts Hyomin and Myungsoo helps her . You should put more HyoSoo/MyungMin in the story instead of just Myungyeon scenes . Make it , Dramatic !!!

P.S.

Man is Zinni_Kim still helping you ? Why jsnt she updating for me ?!
Song_Dae
#10
Chapter 13: Ya ya ya !!! You should put more Hyomin in the story with MyungSoo Jiyeon and Yerim . More drama . Even though Hyomin is my bias , you should make her a bigger b**** and then make her start a fight like beat up girls . More drama like this and your story will be a big hit !!! Please do it !!!