Snowflakes

Golden Feather Poetry

Snowflakes

 
 
 

Whirling down

Lightly and careful

Lying down on the white carpet

White like diamonds

like the smoothest satin

Cold like ice

Pattern following pattern

Little by little bit

Creating a masterpiece

Art

Whirling whirling whirling

One by one

Becoming one with the snow carpet

Swirling

That unique beauty coming down

Becoming one with the sea of frozen water

Snowflakes

 
 
 
 


 
 

author's notes: Have seen no snow this winter at all. Hopefully there will be pretty snowflakes to see next winter >.<



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kpopartory #1
Chapter 21: I feel you
shin-oppa #2
Chapter 2: I'm feeling like crap today (want to throw up and stuff) and saw a volume of poetry in my bookcase and suddenly remembered this poem T_T had to ninja on Aff just to read it again sniff, still ever as lovely
kpopartory #3
Chapter 19: Nice poems. I did read all of it.
LinKagamine #4
Chapter 14: "watching you happy with another should make me at ease

but that's only a lie told to comfort

My sincere wish is to have you look at me

smile and laugh for me

cry for me

love me

and no one else"
True words.
LinKagamine #5
Chapter 13: That's beautiful.
STAR00LIGHT #6
Chapter 15: this one is reminding me of 'mr playboy and his rose' kkkkk
Harpenhield #7
Chapter 13: wha this one is super sweet too! and it's longer. such emotion! it somehow makes me relate to myself! I seriously love it!
Harpenhield #8
Chapter 11: "does it become water / no / it becomes spring"
ohmygod, i just love this part so darn much!
you are really talented, lovely! i'm so glad i found this. they are so beautiful! ♥
Soohya #9
Chapter 10: Wow! They are really really good :D You have a lot of talen in writing everything :)
AptonKey #10
Chapter 6: Damn it's good
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