Water

Golden Feather Poetry

 

Water

 

The water moves lazily

The stream follows

Down and down

Reaching the end of the mountain

But not before it crossed a river

A few hills

Maybe a little house

Moved along the grass and the flowers

A splash here and a splash there

Reflecting the sunshine

Slowly and relaxed

The water moved till it reached the end

The end of the mountain

Jump and fly

Like the fishes and birds do

Rebel and fight

Like how the wind does

But the water just moved

Slow and then quick

Into the sea

Losing its own choice

Isn’t that just like how people are?

Following others, losing their uniqueness

Then what was the point

Of that exciting voyage you did

Before becoming mainstream?

Just like how water moves into the sea

Losing the you

You actually are.

 

 

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kpopartory
#1
Chapter 21: I feel you
shin-oppa
#2
Chapter 2: I'm feeling like crap today (want to throw up and stuff) and saw a volume of poetry in my bookcase and suddenly remembered this poem T_T had to ninja on Aff just to read it again sniff, still ever as lovely
kpopartory
#3
Chapter 19: Nice poems. I did read all of it.
LinKagamine
#4
Chapter 14: "watching you happy with another should make me at ease

but that's only a lie told to comfort

My sincere wish is to have you look at me

smile and laugh for me

cry for me

love me

and no one else"
True words.
LinKagamine
#5
Chapter 13: That's beautiful.
STAR00LIGHT
#6
Chapter 15: this one is reminding me of 'mr playboy and his rose' kkkkk
Harpenhield
#7
Chapter 13: wha this one is super sweet too! and it's longer. such emotion! it somehow makes me relate to myself! I seriously love it!
Harpenhield
#8
Chapter 11: "does it become water / no / it becomes spring"
ohmygod, i just love this part so darn much!
you are really talented, lovely! i'm so glad i found this. they are so beautiful! ♥
Soohya #9
Chapter 10: Wow! They are really really good :D You have a lot of talen in writing everything :)
AptonKey #10
Chapter 6: Damn it's good