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The Cute Panda Boy

1 month have pass

 

Tao is fluent in his Korean and now he is able to speak easily with the Chen, Dara, CL and Minzy. He became more talkative now.

 

Tao and Kris are in their dorm talking about something. Suddenly, Bom message Kris.

 

 

From: Bom the corn queen 

To: Kris the cold guy

 

Is anything alright there?

 

 

From: Kris the cold guy

To: Bom the corn queen

 

Yeah, why?

 

 

From: Bom the corn queen

To: Kris the cold guy

 

Nothing. Just wanted to ask that. Bye.

 

 

From: Kris the cold guy

To: Bom the corn queen.

Bye.

“Who is that ge?” Tao asked.

 

“Bom Noona.” Kris asked.

 

“Ge, can we go shopping?” 

 

“Sure.”

 

They get out from the dorm and walk to the mall.

 

 

“Tao, what do you want to buy?”

 

“Gucci.”

 

“How many Gucci bag or shoe do you have now?” 

 

“More than 5.”

 

“OKeyyyyy.”

 

.....

 

They arrived at the Gucci store and Tao is looking at the bag that he wanted to buy while Kris just follow him.

 

“Ge, I want this one.”

 

“Excuse me, Ms, can we have this one.”

 

“Sure.” 

 

The assistant take the other unit from the store and put it at the cashier.

 

“It cost 130,000 won sir.” the assistant said while put the bag in a paper bag.

 

“Here.” Kris gave the money and give the paper bag to Tao.

 

“Yey.”

While they were walking, they saw Minzy and walk to her.

 

“Oh, dongsaeng, what are you doing here?” Tao and Kris asked.

 

“Oh, I was searching for headphone.” 

 

“Oh. I was searching for powerbank.” Kris said.

 

“Since both of you searching for that type of things, let’s go together.” Tao said.

 

“OK.” Kris and Minzy said.

 

They walk to the store and search for the things that they wanted to search. 

 

5 minutes later,

 

They found their things.

 

“Minzy, I’ll pay for you.” Kris said.

 

“Thanks.”

 

She waited outside of the store with Tao.

 

“So, you bought Gucci again.”

 

“Yeah.”

 

While they were talking, Kris have finish paying and walk outside the store.

 

“Here’s your headpone.” 

 
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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~