New Buddy

The Cute Panda Boy

It’s dinner time. Kris and Lay are cooking in the kitchen while Chen and Tao are at the dining table waiting for the food to arrived.

 

Few minutes later, they finished cooking and they put the food on the table. Then, they started to eat.

 

While they are eating they asked some random question about Tao.

 

Then suddenly, the door bell rang.

 

Kris walk to the door and open the door to see who is it. It’s Himchan, Yongguk and Zelo. 

 

“Oh, come in.” Kris said and bow to them.

 

They bow and come in.

 

“Are we disturbing you?” Yongguk asked.

 

“Ani, Ani. We’re just in the middle of eating our dinner.” Kris said and the other three stop eating and walk to the living room.

 

“Zelo looks tired. What happened?” Lay asked.

 

“Oh he is sick today.” Himchan said while Zelo lay his head on Himchan’s shoulder.

 

“Poor Zelo.” Chen said.

 

Tao just sitting on the sofa with a ‘dumbfounded’ face. 

 

“Kris who is that guy?” Yongguk whispered to Kris.

 

“Oh his name is Tao. The four girls found him when he is sitting inside the box so they decided to take them home. He woke up and he is there. He only can speak a bit of Korean and he is good in his Mandarin.” Kris said.

 

“Oh, Poor guy.” Himchan said.

 

“Omma (Himchan) can we go home?” Zelo asked in a cute husky voice.

 

“Sure.” Himchan said and three of them walk out from the dorm.”

 

“Bye.” They said and the other 4 reply back. Then, they continue to eat.

 

 

That night

 

 

4 of them go to their bedroom. Lay and Chen are in the same room and Tao and Kris are in the same room. 

 

“OK, Tao we are going to start the lesson for 1 hour.” Kris said.

 

30 minutes later, Kris have to go to the toilet. When he came back from the toilet he saw Tao fell a sleep. So, he carry him bridal style and place him on the bed and kiss his forehead.

 
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6November1990 #1
Chapter 23: Yay!!! So ur P6 too. Finally, someone who understands how I feel...
rainydots #2
OMG TAO AND 2NE1! Looks interesting!
Wushupandabear #3
Chapter 2: Ahhhh, you put B.A.P and EXO together. I'm dead.
Totomatoes #4
Chapter 12: Okay since it's just an opinion, please don't hate me.

Your story is kind of plain. I mean, sure there were grammar mistakes but I could care less about that. I'm not a grammar nazi. Anyway, (IN MY OPINION PLEASE DON'T KILL ME) when I read, I didn't see the true flow of the story in my head. It sounded and seemed monotonous. I imagined them doing and talking with poker faces. The events and the flow are too fast, you weren't able to show the development of the characters' feelings and thoughts. I'm not being mean, I just want to help. I know I'm not even a writer, but I like reading :) And I'm happy to read other people's stories.

I hoped I helped, I'm not sure if you're my dongsaeng or hyung. But really, I know my opinion hurt you, even if I tried not to, but my intention was to help. (I'm really worried if you're angry or upset about this)

Please don't take it too hard. Uhm... do your best in your stories :) Don't give up and take care of yourself!! (It's off topic and I sound like a mom)

So uhm... yeah. My opinion... uhh… yeah. *awkward cough*
MaeYoung04
#5
Chapter 10: puhlease upeudateu unnie~!
bobbymbap
#6
Chapter 10: miss 2nexo im your unnie and i command u to update more xie cie kamsahanmida
chunjoe1004 #7
nice story!
bobbymbap
#8
Chapter 8: update more
MaeYoung04
#9
Chapter 7: too many updates in one day dude~