A CHRISTMAS CAROL (ADAPTATION FIRST PART)

Big Bang Stories

I don´t know why but i really love this story of Charles Dickens xD

 

Christmas Eve a special and expected night; the day when many families gather together to celebrate and thank God for another year of life. The panorama in Seoul isn´t different to the rest of the world.

But not all is happiness and as in all the stories we need a main character, so we need to go to YG Company and to meet Kwon Ji Yong a workaholic and heartless men. He and his friend Yang Hyun Suk founded this company 5 years ago and instantly they reached success in the music industry in Korea and around Asia, Hyun Suk passed away a year ago and now all the company belong to Ji Yong. Well it´s enough, stop to talk about the past and began with the real story!

Ji Yong sat busy in his music studio trying to finish a new track for his next album. It was very cold outside and Ji Yong´s studio wasn´t warmer either. Lost in his own world full of lyrics and music he didn’t realize that a cute and caring person was standing and leaning his body on the doorframe watching Ji Yong with eyes full of love.

-What do you want? - Asked Ji Yong with a cold tone when he noticed Seungri´s presence- Since when do you have the habit to stalk people? - He grumbled

Soon the lovely eyes became sad and full of disappoint-I´m sorry Sajangnim, I didn´t want to interrupt you, please don´t think bad- Ji Yong ignored Seungri’s words and keep working – I finished all the duties, so I should leave, just one last thing H..Hyung d..do you-

What the hell Seungri! You know that I hate when people can´t finish the words, if you don´t have nothing to say just leave, stop bothering me and remember that I need you tomorrow morning!-Ji Yong yelled.

Seungri wide his eyes and tried to stop the tears that were starting to flow down, he took a breathe and start to talk again – Hyung, tomorrow is Christmas and my family is here, please just give me a free day I want to spend tomorrow with them, I haven´t see them since I began to work here-

That´s not my problem Seungri, if you don´t come tomorrow forget about me and your job. You shouldn´t been thinking in Christmas and family when you are working in a big company, remember that if we lose a day we lose money; you don´t want to see me angry, right baby? - Ji Yong walked towards Seungri and now was deposited a kiss in his cheek.

Seungri nodded –Hyung, where are you going to spend this night? Is just that I don´t want that you be alone- Seungri said meanwhile Ji keep kissing Seungri´s neck.

-Riri, do you want to spend the night with me? I can´t believe that you keep begging me, was just one night jajajajajaja!  But, it’s Christmas and I’m going to fulfill your desires – And with that Ji Yong trapped Seungri between his body and the wall.

-No Hyung stop it! - Seungri yelled and pushed Ji Yong away.

-What is the ing problem! This is what you wanted! - Ji Yong was starting to lose control.

-No Hyung, you are wrong, I don’t what a night of - Seungri was crying- What I want you never could give me.

And with these last words Seungri left the studio leaving a speechless Ji Yong. In the way to the exit Seungri was ran into YoungBae – Seungri wait, are you ok?-

-I´m fine Hyung, just need to go home, Merry Christmas- Seungri put a forced smile in his face, wiped his tears and ran towards to the lift.

YoungBae keep his way towards the studio to talk with Ji Yong, he knew that something happen between his friend and Seungri. Ji Yong is not a friendly person and is worst with the boy for that reason YoungBae has always thought that Ji Yong feel something for SeungRi, but his friend is stubborn and can´t accept his own feelings.

The door studio was open and YoungBae entered –What´s up bro? - He said with a smile in his face- I saw Seungri a moment ago, he looked bad Ji, something happened?- Ji Yong turned and stared his friend with an annoyed face-

-It´s not your business Bae, stop worrying about useless things-

Young Bae raised an eyebrow and folded his arms – One day that boy is going to leave you and you are going regret it-

A shiver ran through Ji Yong´s body but he tried to keep calm-I don´t care, Seungri is only and employee, I’m sure I can get another assistant in Seoul-

YoungBae rolled his eyes but decided not to say more about Seungri- Whatever you say, I´m not here to scold you, I want to invite you to my house tonight; Yuri and me are going to cook a dinner for family and friends to celebrate this day-

-Bah! - Said Ji Yong -Humbug! I don´t have time to think in Christmas Bae, I need to finish three songs and you know what I think about it. Just Marketing! –

-Christmas a humbug, Ji Yong! - Said YoungBae- I can´t believe you think that, you know Christmas is more than Marketing!-

-Stop Bae I don´t want a speech about Christmas´ meaning- Young Bae shut his mouth, he didn’t want to get mad with his friend tonight.

-I really hope that one day your vision of life changes before it´s too late- YoungBae hugged his friend-Merry Christmas and if you change your mind you are welcome in my house-

-Before you leave I have to tell you that you are not going to offer the concert in the hospital-YoungBae wide his eyes and stare Ji Yong-You have a concert in Nagoya in three days, so we can´t lose time in things like that- With that Ji Yong turned his back to his friend and continued his work. Young Bae just sighed and left the studio, trying to calm down his fury.

Ji Yong keep working in his lyrics and music, until he was hungry and watched the hour- It´s 10 pm- he stood up, stretched his body, took his coat and decides to go home. Ji Yong walked through the empty hallway seeing the snow fall out of the window.

He was near of the exit when suddenly heard a noise, deep down below, as if somebody was dragging a heavy chain. The noise came nearer and nearer, and then Ji Yong saw a ghost coming right through the main hallway, he tried to escape of the building but the door was locked; Ji Yong was scared, breathless and a cold sweat was running through his body.

The chain noise stopped and Ji Yong thought that he was only imagined things, so he turned around and found a ghost in front of him –This is just a dream, so keep calm Ji Yong and wake up! - He slapped his own face and opened the eyes but the ghost was still there and now Ji Yong can felt ghost´s cold breathes.

Ji Yong saw the ghost from feet to head, It was Hyun Suk’s ghost, and his chains were long; they were made of cash-boxes, keys and heavy purses.

-Who are you? - said Ji Yong

-In life I was your partner and Hyung, Yang Hyun Suk-

-But why do you come to me now?-

-I must wander through the world and I wear the chains because I was so stingy in life. I only cared about business but not about the people around me. Now, I am here to warn you. You still have a chance, Ji Yong. Three spirits will come to you. Expect the first tomorrow, when the bell tolls one-

When he had said these words, Hyun Suk’s ghost disappeared; and the night became quiet again. Ji Yong felt his legs like gelatin with difficult  he opened the main door and ran towards the security of his house, he didn´t mind about how the cold air was hitting his face like a thousand of points.

Ji Yong was scared….really SCARED.

 

 

 

  

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sadiraelau
#1
Chapter 5: Both of them gonna die in the future? :O
No please don't let them die >.< hope Ji can change the future!
ozwalkr #2
Chapter 5: Present is Dae Dae..the term Angel gave that away...Future is Top~! I knew it would be 8D.
lovefoxx
#3
Chapter 4: Is Daesung!!, estoy más que segura :), que enfermedad tiene Seungri?? .-.
sadiraelau
#4
Chapter 4: The second spirit is Daesung? Omg i'm bad at guessing, hehe >.<
What happen with Seungri? :O finish this travel and then Jiyong can find Seungri ;)
lovefoxx
#5
Chapter 3: I'm happy that you're adapting this story, I remember I read the book and it make me cry. Obviously the ghost is Lee hi xd. Can't wait to see who is going to be the second ghost ^.^

Ps: you should find a beta, your story will improve if you do it :)
sadiraelau
#6
Chapter 3: Who is the little ghost? Hehe. Now Ji, forget work and hang out with your maknae ^^
jongkeyminkey
#7
Chapter 3: Lee hi?
Oh i love this. I can't wait for ji to beg for forgiveness to seungri, n be happy together. Kkk
sadiraelau
#8
Chapter 2: Ahhh! This is nice! This is amazing! I can't wait to read fpr Jiyong to change his attitude and behaviour! Thank you for writing this Christmas Carol!! ♥
Nomochan
#9
Chapter 2: I love how you combined "A Christmas Carol" with Big Bang. I can't to read about what Jiyong's going to see Seungri's future.
ozwalkr #10
Chapter 2: I LOVE A CHRISTMAS CAROL!! Thank you for adapting this!! *dances in anticipation*
Thank you very much, Thank you very much, thats the nicest thing that anyone's ever done for me...It sounds a bit bizarre, but things the way they are, I feel as if another life's begun for me...And if I had a trumpet i would blow it, to add a sort of celebratory touch....but since I left my trumpet at home, I'll simply have to say...Thank you very, very, very much. Thank you very, very,very much.... ROFLMAO!!!! Yeah I LOVE this story!