Fall

It Can Never Be You
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[CONTENTID2]It Can Never Be You - Fall[/CONTENTID2]

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Thunder P.O.V

Thunder heard the clang of the door behind him, heavy iron metal slamming back into the door frame. He hadn’t intended to close the door quite that hard, even though he was upset. He had first seen the mysterious prisoner as they were dragging him in. Even under all the dirt, blood and streaming tears he was the most gorgeous man Thunder had ever laid eyes on. He’d worked hard to convince the head guard that he was capable of taking over, since other guards were called away for the still ongoing battles in other parts of their country.

The first time he had been on guard, the handsome prisoner had been asleep. fitfully in his sleep a name that Thunder had never heard, “Mir.” Who this “Mir” character was, Thunder wasn’t sure, but he suddenly felt that stab of jealously that he hadn’t felt since he was a young teen. However his sudden desire for the name to have been a very different one, was replaced with concern. The prisoner, though still shrouded in his torn uniform, was clearly becoming malnourished. As time wore on and his captain heard no word from the opposing forces about an exchange, they treated him less and less like he was anything of value. Though it was his time to change guard, Thunder had made sure to leave a small bowl of rice that he had brought for a snack.

Now he had actually met the oft-thought about prisoner, and he was sure wh

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Karenkitty1092 #1
Chapter 10: Yay i`m happy that Thunder found someone that loves him.This was an awesome story.
GenerationX
#2
Chapter 10: yaaahoooooo!^^ I'm so releived you decided to make a happy ending!!! and this was really great: I loved how shocked Thunder was at Tao's manly and over confident behaviour! Tao's caring was really sweet.
what else to say that you don't already know? this story was great, very moving and incredibly well-written. you had me cry and hope and cry again. and though they've all had their happy ending, we know they aren't the persons they were in the first place. war and their own experience of it have changed them. I'm really looking forward to a sequel!^^
whitestallion
#3
Chapter 10: Ha. Ha. i love the ending!! xD and yes, its really good that thunder didn't die! and because Tao is my bias in exo, i'm happy to have more mention of him. him and thunder, though, seems a tad weird. xD HAHA. but i'd love a sequel ^^
GenerationX
#4
Chapter 9: their hopes seem too high to turn out right. I'm afraid Mir will find a stranger that is now going to be eaten alive by guilt and despair. they've both had traumatic experiences. please don't make them suffer anymore...
Joon is so brave. he has to heal for Thunder's sake so he won't be dead for nothing!!!
GenerationX
#5
Chapter 8: what are you doing to my poor heart!?0.0
this was painful... once again it happened and Joon lost his beloved in the most violent way. they were torn apart. and knowing Mir is alive won't subside the pain. I hope he'll be able to find Mir. but then, even if he did, he's changed and can he really love him again? there's always gonna be Thunder's ghost behind them...
you didn't habe to thank me, I should be the one thanking you for writing such a great story. please, update soon!^^
Karenkitty1092 #6
Chapter 8: Joon`s gonna go crazy once he finds out that Mir is alive.Thanks for the update.
GenerationX
#7
Chapter 7: Joon is gonna be such a wreck when he'll realise Mir was never gone... and at the same time, he needs Thunder and his tenderness to survive. and Thunder's determination to get him free is a precious tool too. I'm both angry and grateful at Thunder. His own selfishness is so understandable but it is still despicable. I'm afraid Joon will go insane.
GenerationX
#8
Chapter 6: and I did devoure these chapters! I love the plot and as I already mentionned, your style.
but I can't help but loathe Thundet to be so selfish! is it really love when you think about you first? he should tell Joon. of course he knows that once Joon will know Mir is alive, he'll never ever have a chance to be loved back. but Joon deserve this hope to survive. he needs it to keep on living peacefully instead of having to deal with the guilt he is feeling now.
but I'm glad Thunder is taking care of Joon at least he has now a chance to survive.
GenerationX
#9
Chapter 1: oh my! I just started to read the 1st chapter and this story is so gripping! I love your writing style! It is so moving and accurate! I'm sure I'll devoure the rest.
BlueChaos #10
Chapter 5: Thanks for the update! I like the little conversation about the differences between their countries, and looking forward to reading more. :D