Blood

It Can Never Be You
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[CONTENTID2]It Can Never Be You - Blood[/CONTENTID2]

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“Don’t let go! Just don’t!” Joon, second in command of the first Guard in the Melvatri army, begged the injured boy beneath him. Blood poured from a wound on his chest, and Joon didn’t have the time or focusing ability to see if it was mortal. Not to mention he was terrified of finding out, knowing he would go completely insane if he knew he would be losing him. Arrows flew past their scant cover of fallen branches, and Joon did all he could to cover the smaller, protecting him from further harm.

This had been a bad idea from the onset. Joon had tried to warn their commander of possible ambush, and yet, G.O  had refused to listen. Now they had all paid the price, but G.O more than anyone else, who lay with the slain on the battlefield. The barbarians of the Tsun lay waste to their army like a scythe to wheat. So much carnage, the screams still echoed in his ears, driving him mad. His only sanity was the boy beneath him, that he held possessively close. They had never wanted this. To be soldiers. But when the Guard knocks on your door you go, or perhaps be tried for treason before the Council – or merely vanish in the night.

The love of his life hadn’t been called, but he had followed all the same. Followed Joon to this destruction and chaos, an innocent lamb that follows its master to slaughter. And now he was paying the price. Joon did his best to staunch the flow of crimson from Mir’s wound, but he didn’t know how effective his gore soaked, muddy sash could be, or if it was to make things even worse. Mir was sobbing, hands clenched about Joon’s arms, feeling the taut muscles beneath his grip through his haze of unimaginable pain.

“Don’t you dare,” Joon warned, seeing the helplessness in the other’s eyes, “You’re staying with me. You’re mine! Don’t leave me,” he begged, feeling tears sting in his eyes to drip onto the other, “Just hold on, ok?” he whispered, not sure if the other could hear over the clanging of battle and the screams of the dying. Just like Mir had screamed not

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Karenkitty1092 #1
Chapter 10: Yay i`m happy that Thunder found someone that loves him.This was an awesome story.
GenerationX
#2
Chapter 10: yaaahoooooo!^^ I'm so releived you decided to make a happy ending!!! and this was really great: I loved how shocked Thunder was at Tao's manly and over confident behaviour! Tao's caring was really sweet.
what else to say that you don't already know? this story was great, very moving and incredibly well-written. you had me cry and hope and cry again. and though they've all had their happy ending, we know they aren't the persons they were in the first place. war and their own experience of it have changed them. I'm really looking forward to a sequel!^^
whitestallion
#3
Chapter 10: Ha. Ha. i love the ending!! xD and yes, its really good that thunder didn't die! and because Tao is my bias in exo, i'm happy to have more mention of him. him and thunder, though, seems a tad weird. xD HAHA. but i'd love a sequel ^^
GenerationX
#4
Chapter 9: their hopes seem too high to turn out right. I'm afraid Mir will find a stranger that is now going to be eaten alive by guilt and despair. they've both had traumatic experiences. please don't make them suffer anymore...
Joon is so brave. he has to heal for Thunder's sake so he won't be dead for nothing!!!
GenerationX
#5
Chapter 8: what are you doing to my poor heart!?0.0
this was painful... once again it happened and Joon lost his beloved in the most violent way. they were torn apart. and knowing Mir is alive won't subside the pain. I hope he'll be able to find Mir. but then, even if he did, he's changed and can he really love him again? there's always gonna be Thunder's ghost behind them...
you didn't habe to thank me, I should be the one thanking you for writing such a great story. please, update soon!^^
Karenkitty1092 #6
Chapter 8: Joon`s gonna go crazy once he finds out that Mir is alive.Thanks for the update.
GenerationX
#7
Chapter 7: Joon is gonna be such a wreck when he'll realise Mir was never gone... and at the same time, he needs Thunder and his tenderness to survive. and Thunder's determination to get him free is a precious tool too. I'm both angry and grateful at Thunder. His own selfishness is so understandable but it is still despicable. I'm afraid Joon will go insane.
GenerationX
#8
Chapter 6: and I did devoure these chapters! I love the plot and as I already mentionned, your style.
but I can't help but loathe Thundet to be so selfish! is it really love when you think about you first? he should tell Joon. of course he knows that once Joon will know Mir is alive, he'll never ever have a chance to be loved back. but Joon deserve this hope to survive. he needs it to keep on living peacefully instead of having to deal with the guilt he is feeling now.
but I'm glad Thunder is taking care of Joon at least he has now a chance to survive.
GenerationX
#9
Chapter 1: oh my! I just started to read the 1st chapter and this story is so gripping! I love your writing style! It is so moving and accurate! I'm sure I'll devoure the rest.
BlueChaos #10
Chapter 5: Thanks for the update! I like the little conversation about the differences between their countries, and looking forward to reading more. :D