Trouble In Paradise

A Common Love Story

Hey everyone!=!!(= Haha.The last chapter was mostly about Brenda and Taemin.So,this chappie will mostly be about the other main.MABEL(=

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-FTI dorm-

Hongki:We are back!!

Mabel:How was everything?

Jaejin:Great!(=

Brenda:So Jaejin Oppa.I heard you looked like a witch after Mabel was done with you.

Jaejin:Uh...

MinHwan:He looked worse than a witch..

Seunghyun:He looked like a punk wannabe with really bad make-up.HAHA

Brenda:Seriously?OMG.I want to see...

Seunghyun:I took some pictures of him actually...(=

Jaejin:BWOH?!LET ME SEE.

Seunghyun:I was kidding...*whisper* I'll let you see it later.

Jaejin:Hmm...

MinHwan:Good thing ChanYoong was there.She was amazing.

Hongki:Yeah!Her skills are like..Wow.

Jonghoon:So,how was your date?

Brenda:Uh.It went fine(=

Mabel:Yeah..So fine they are officially together..

Jaejin:*raise eyebrows*

Brenda:Uh yeah..We are kinda together now i guess...

MinHwan:O.o Interesting..( I hope Jonghoon Hyung will be alright..)

Hongki:Already?But its only been like ... what.24hours?

Brenda:I don't know...

Mabel:Uh..Guys.I'm going down to buy stuff..*whisper*Goat,take care of Jonghoon Hyung.Look at his face

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Jaejin:Ok.Hyung.Come on.I need to borrow something from you.

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Mabel POV

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Mabel:I hope Hyung will be alright.

Biker:Hey pretty girl..*Pedo face*

Mabel:Bwoh?Who are you?Don't touch me.

Biker2:Ooo.Pretty girl's got a temper..Nice.I like my girls alittle...hot.

Mabel:I'm warning you.Leave me alone.Or else..

Biker3:Or else what?You'll scream for help?News flash.There is nobody around.

Mabel:Or else nothing...I could just kick you at the place where the sun never shines.

Biker:Bwoh?

*Mabel KICKS! and run*

Biker;After her!!!

-Meanwhile-

-Jonghoon room-

Jaejin:Hyung..Are you ok?

Jonghoon:What?What makes you think i'm upset?

Jaejin:Uh.Hyung.Don't deny it anymore.You like Brenda.And now she's with Tae..

Jonghoon:Ok.Fine.I like Brenda.But she's now with Tae.It doesn't matter anymore..

Jaejin:Hyung...

Jonghoon:I'm fine Jin..

*Knock knock*

Seunghyun:Hyung..

Jonghoon:What?

Seunghyun:YOu alright?

Jonghoon:What?Are my feelings that obvious?

Seunghyun:Uh..Like duh?

Jonghoon:To everyone except Brenda it seems..

Jaejin:She'll know one day..

Seunghyun:Yup..She will..

*Brenda comes in*

Brenda:Oppa! Mabel called me!She's in trouble!!!

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Author(ME) POV

Mabel:THANKS.Leaving me in this cliffhanger..

Me:Hey.I just wanted to try out the cliff-hanger style for once ok?

Brenda:But its so short..

Me:Hey,just this one.My mummy is going all 'STUDY!' on me ok?

Mabel:Yeah yeah.STUDY.

Jaejin;YAH.Thank alot.I'm worried sick about my baby.

Me:Yo.You guys are fictional characters you know right?

Jaejin:SO? I like to be dilusional ok?

Seunghyun:HAHAHA.

MinHwan:OWNED

Me: -_-

Hongki:She's getting pissed.Shh.Otherwise we may have no love story!!

Me:You got THAT right.

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I'm gonna rewrite some of the earlier chaps to make it smoother.LOLS.Go back and read em when you have the time,it still has the same flow thou.

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