Chapter 1: I really like this little oneshot! You had very simple situations that were transformed into adorable moments! I liked how there was still an awkwardness betwren them (since they just met), but they were still really cute together! Some parts did not flow very well, and there was a few grammar mistakes, but the story was still enjoyable! I also love the idea of the main character being a trainee tehehe! If you ever do another V fanfic, maybe include a bit more of his trademark "4D"ness. Overall, a really nice story!
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