Angels is a story that I feel deserved a seven. The writing style that was used I usually do not like to read, but for two reasons I read and finished the story. The first reason is because it was a request and the second is that although the writing style is one I do not like, and some will agree and some will disagree, it still was a good story. It was a short story, about three chapters, so it was rushed a bit. The last chapter was marked with an ‘M’, but it was not ual or violent or promoting drugs or etc. (Please explain why it is marked ‘M’ please). Though the story was rushed, short, and a different writing style this story did make me want to finish reading it. The love Joon had for Thunder was cute and the fact he always stayed by his side was even cuter. The details about the angels made some questions come to my head and some notes that I will share.

The story Angels reminded me of some other fanfictions I have read, but this story is by far similar with plots to those I have read. The story is about Joon’s love for his mortal. I think the love the sweet, but if his mortal never saw them, it’d be a love that would never get returned. The ending was one I had kind of expected, but having it typed out and official was a better prediction I had thought up. If someone wanted to read an MBLAQ story, this is a story I would recommend to them. I enjoyed this fanfiction and I know others have and will too.

Some notes that I have are that, I know some people believe in angels and others do not, but the parts where Thunder’s sister walks in at the perfect moment to prove their theory. I think that maybe they could’ve invited someone over or called the sister up instead of having her come up to try and wake him up. Another note I have is when their “boss” popped up out of nowhere to shut down G.O’s theory/plan. A better way to have blown off G.O’s plan would have the Guardian warn them before he leaves the first time. I am sorry if I come across rude, I am just giving out some ideas that would work better.

The questions that came to my head were, if clear angels were the ultimate angel why did he have black and white feathers? It also mentioned that his white feathers were just coming in when he would’ve had to have pure white feathers when he was a white angel. If I miss read the feather thing I am sorry, but my last question is, where did you come up with the idea of the angels having orbs?

This was my review for Angels by Kimichi21! Here is a LINK for those interested in this story! I do recommend it! Thank you for requesting and I hope I get more requests from you in the future! Don’t forget to comment and upvote if you want to! YOU DO NOT HAVE TO UPVOTE IT IS AN ONLY IF YOU WANT TO! Thank you! ^^

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