Chapter 9: Aww, this is sad. I was thinking of requesting for a review of my new fic. But I understand.I am a college freshman and school is really tough. Fighting, author-nim!^^
Hello! I'd like to request for my story Ice Queen. It's a BAP fanfiction with an OC named Martzia. It also has Hyunseung of B2st and maybe more members will appear. It's unfinished and currently has six chapters. It's about Martzia, the queen of the school, whose main purpose is to break hearts. She has her reasons which are only known to her best friend, Hyunseung. The elite of her school, known as Best Absolute Perfect, are the top of the top and desired by everyone. When one of them falls in love with her, what will happen? One chapter is rated, but honestly nothing happens. I'm just a little paranoid about those things. It says "subscribers only" and you can feel free to unsubscribe when you're done with my review or I can make it public. Here be the link! http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/531759/ice-queen-b2st-beast-hyunseung-romance-bap-daehyun
Chapter 7: Thank you so much for the review. I can still hear my heartbeat. ^_^ ehem. As for your questions, I'll start with the "M" chapter. It was actually stated in the 3rd Chapter why. It's because of the topless guys. I asked the moderators if I could post it since it could be marked as "" so they told me to mark it as "M". As per writing style... I don't really know how to explain. I'm probably not good at explaining that's why I wasn't coming out in a good way? Don't really know. Sorry.
As for the notes... Doongie's sister came up to wake him because it was a bit right after his alarm went off. When the alarm went off, Doongie went back to sleep and that's when the two fought. So I think Byunghee's additional explanations made it seem like it took a while before Durami entered the scene. So yeah... As for the Guardian popping up and cutting Byunghee off... I thought it was kinda comedic to do so. but obviously I failed. T_T ehem. and also... as a whole explanation to that. I didn't base the Angels on any theory and it was plain imagination. as per the wing colors, personalities, duties and appearances... It was all imagined. Not based on anything at all. The clear angels have white and black because they're the mediator. usually the one who has come through a cycle of being a white and a black angel. And they also have clear wings on top of their head. That's probably what you're asking. The wings on their head (just like the one in chapter one as portrayed by Byunghee in the poster) turn to white or black depending on the mortal that they are taking care of. So that's why. And finally for the orbs... Well like I told you... it was just pure imagination without basis so I carved the characters into what I, myself, imagined them to be. hehe. So sorry for the weird info... but I did give out that it was pure fictional and pure imagination. so yeah... hihi.
thank you so much for reviewing Angels. I really appreciate it. ^_^
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