I Hate You, Kris Wu! I think deserved a seven out of ten. The story was written between Kris, Claire (OC), and the narrator. I found the writing style unique yet not. I found the story funny, over dramatic at points (will explain), and sometimes a little confusing.

The story was very amusing and when I was at school it was what I thought of. The story made me laugh and connect with their feelings. I was laughing to the point I was crying when they were at the airport and when Claire and Kris were in London and EXO-M decided to do something for Claire. I do not know EXO that much honestly, but I did feel myself caring and wanting to listen to their music while I read this.

The reason I found it over dramatic is because I think the characters were too dramatic (but again I could be wrong I do not know EXO’s personalities at all). I think when the hurricane happened it should’ve been showing signs and saying how the sky was turning dark and the air was cold. Also I think if I thought my best friend was dead I would be crying and worried sick. The characters did seem worried, but it was more of the lines of if she was getting bullied by a 10 year old. They were worried and kept calling; I hope this makes sense to you. I also think that a parent wouldn’t allow their child and their child’s friends go out in a hurricane to go to the airport. I know it was to get EXO-M, Eunmi (sorry if wrong going off by memory), and Claire all there, but yeah just being honest. I was a bit skeptical with Claire getting attacked out of the bathroom and in the store, but I have thought about it and decided that it was actually a really good touch. Models get stalked all the time and same with idols. Otherwise I found the story very good.

The story was a little confusing with the little minor mistakes. I know people make mistakes, but a good tip (not trying to be rude) is to reread it before you update or ask a friend to read it and edit it. The beginning of the story they’d be at Kris’s house then all of a sudden at Claire’s. It would confuse me a bit, but not to the point where it would distract a normal reader. I do look for mistakes to help people so I catch some things.

This story got a seven because though I loved it and I will write a blog about it and request it when people ask me for fanfictions to read I think this story could’ve been a little more thought through and reread. I loved your story asdffghjkl and I do hope you give me more stories to read in the future. ^^

Here is a LINK to the story. I do really request to nonfans and fans of EXO.

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