Between You and Me By, Kpuffgie

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Between You and Me earned a nine. The story has a plot I have not read before. This story made me cry, angry, and smile. Between You and Me is a story that truly made me cry and feel the same feelings Seohyun felt. I do not know Super Junior well, but I enjoyed this story a lot to the point it drove me to look up everyone’s names on Google images and look at them to know what they looked like. This story is truly one of the very few stories that drove me to tears.

Between You and Me made me cry when Kyuhyun found her at the park. My heart hurt and felt heavy when Seohyun kept walking away from him. This story describes someone’s first heartbreak well. I may not know Super Junior, but I felt like I did when I read the story. Jonghyun’s love for Seohyun is cute, and I personally think the true Jonghyun wouldn’t care if someone knew he liked someone. I may not know Super Junior, but I am sure that in this story it plays Jonghyun off well. The part when Jonghyun finds her at school crying and he said, “You shouldn’t have lied.” The tears had started up again.

I was angry when Taeyeon showed up I thought I was going to lose it. I loved that even though her love for Kyuhyun was hard enough a love rival showed up. There hasn’t been much of a fight on Taeyeon side other than confessing her love to Kyuhyun before Seohyun. Another time I felt my blood boil is when the big secret of Kyuhyun’s father came out.

All the times I wasn’t crying or angry the story was cute. The notes that Jonghyun leaves is a nice touch within the story. I love that Minah is the loud mouth friend that Seohyun can always go to when she runs away from home.  Between You and Me may not be my favorite of all stories it made me cry and connect with the characters and was still a very good story. I think this story earned a nine and I request this story to many people. I hope I get more requests from Kpuffgie in the future and since this story is not finish I hope I can find the time to read along at the chapters are updated. ^^

LINK of course of the story! ^^

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kpuffgie #1
Chapter 9: Aww, this is sad. I was thinking of requesting for a review of my new fic. But I understand.I am a college freshman and school is really tough. Fighting, author-nim!^^
hana01 #2
Hi! If you have time, please review my story. It's unfinished but I need someone to comment about my story. Here's the link :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/536366/i-am-the-first-wife-ii-sad-sequel-exo-exom-xiumin


Title : I Am The First Wife 2
The main character is EXO's Xiumin and OC (Kim Seulyeon).
annawhimsy #3
Chapter 6: Thank you for the review~!
I'll try to slow down the pace, thank you for the advice!
myseunghoho #4
Hi, could you read and review "Another man's baby" ? My main character is GO (Byunghee) from MBLAQ.
LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/544744/another-man-s-baby-jungbyunghee-mblaq-romance-mblaqgo-mblaqandyou


Pleaseeee and thank you ♥
LISHlian #5
HEYYY!! Dropping by for a request for my fanfic "Nemesis of the Sky Descendants". Characters are Krystal, Kai & basically Exo.
It's a Kaistal fanfic and here's the link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/388020/nemesis-of-the-sky-descendants-angst-fantasy-krystal-romance-exo-kai-kaistal
And lastly, just take as longgg as you please to review this story since it's not completed yet XD
Thanks in advance!!!
Lovex2254 #6
Hello! I'd like to request for my story Ice Queen. It's a BAP fanfiction with an OC named Martzia. It also has Hyunseung of B2st and maybe more members will appear. It's unfinished and currently has six chapters. It's about Martzia, the queen of the school, whose main purpose is to break hearts. She has her reasons which are only known to her best friend, Hyunseung. The elite of her school, known as Best Absolute Perfect, are the top of the top and desired by everyone. When one of them falls in love with her, what will happen? One chapter is rated, but honestly nothing happens. I'm just a little paranoid about those things. It says "subscribers only" and you can feel free to unsubscribe when you're done with my review or I can make it public. Here be the link!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/531759/ice-queen-b2st-beast-hyunseung-romance-bap-daehyun
Nictaeny9 #7
Hey! Requesting for a review! It's a Taeny fanfic, genre is Drama, Dark, Romance.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-dark-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany
myheartswishes #8
Could you review my story? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/335219 HEHE thanks :)
illuminousink #9
Chapter 7: Thank you so much for the review. I can still hear my heartbeat. ^_^ ehem. As for your questions, I'll start with the "M" chapter. It was actually stated in the 3rd Chapter why. It's because of the topless guys. I asked the moderators if I could post it since it could be marked as "" so they told me to mark it as "M". As per writing style... I don't really know how to explain. I'm probably not good at explaining that's why I wasn't coming out in a good way? Don't really know. Sorry.
As for the notes... Doongie's sister came up to wake him because it was a bit right after his alarm went off. When the alarm went off, Doongie went back to sleep and that's when the two fought. So I think Byunghee's additional explanations made it seem like it took a while before Durami entered the scene. So yeah... As for the Guardian popping up and cutting Byunghee off... I thought it was kinda comedic to do so. but obviously I failed. T_T ehem. and also... as a whole explanation to that. I didn't base the Angels on any theory and it was plain imagination. as per the wing colors, personalities, duties and appearances... It was all imagined. Not based on anything at all. The clear angels have white and black because they're the mediator. usually the one who has come through a cycle of being a white and a black angel. And they also have clear wings on top of their head. That's probably what you're asking. The wings on their head (just like the one in chapter one as portrayed by Byunghee in the poster) turn to white or black depending on the mortal that they are taking care of. So that's why. And finally for the orbs... Well like I told you... it was just pure imagination without basis so I carved the characters into what I, myself, imagined them to be. hehe. So sorry for the weird info... but I did give out that it was pure fictional and pure imagination. so yeah... hihi.
thank you so much for reviewing Angels. I really appreciate it. ^_^
thesmartass #10
Hello, I wondering if you could look over my story and well review it!

Thank you so much by the way xD

Title: coffee with a dash of annoyance
Characters: Luhan, Yixing [Exo]
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/539192/

omgg, thank you so much though!
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