Servile Unit Seventeen By Annawhimsy
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Servile Unit Seventeen is a story that I have never heard about. The plot is unique and the fact that it is so unique I think draws the readers more into the story. I think this story deserved an eight because I have only found, really, one thing that could be fixed, but the author also might be doing it on purpose. The story so far isn’t so much funny, but kind of saddening. I think the story line has been going too fast and is rushed, but again this might be done on purpose. All in all I think this story is great and readers would be willing to wait months for updates.
Servile Unit Seventeen is a story where Gongchan is a “robot” that is a servant to the rich boy, Jinyoung. The foreword is about how Gongchan has a horrible past and that he serves Jinyoung, but right away within four chapters he has quit and going into modeling. The plot could change and go back to Gongchan serving Jinyoung, but I do not know. Since this story isn’t finish there isn’t a lot I can say about the plot because it seems as it just got started. So far this story is detailed and interesting. I love the plot and the nicknames Gongchan gives Jinyoung’s friends. This story has deserved an eight and it is only a few chapters into the story line. So, since there isn’t a lot I can say so far other than that everything is great so far other than the fast pace why don’t you (Annawhimsy) request for me to review this story again when it is finished or close to finishing? I will gladly review the full story then! This story is great and I look forward to the maybe future review.
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