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LI XIUMEI.
sweet innocent guy. zhang yixing 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Yo Xiumei, your name is really Xiumei? lol. Back to the form, although your personality is a bit short, but you did told us about her personality, i just hope you will elaborate more. well your background is really detailed. haha. you write everything good, and there are no mistakes. and aww... you made Lay really so innocent, lol. and i hate jessica because of what you write on her (just kidding). overall everything is good. thanks for applying and be the first applicants! hehe 

     

 ( SCENE_KILLER ; ) Hey Xiumei, I love how you write everything detailed. It was really helpful in understanding your application. You and Lay's relationship is really cute and would be fun to write about.▼  

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moon hyunae.
VIRTUAL GUY. DO KYUNGSOO 

 ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello, DeeDee. First, thank you for applying. Then your personality and background are good. No mistakes. And how you write Kyungsoo was total hilarious. He is really stick into the computer. haha. Well I have nothing to write about because your form is good. So thanks for applying again and hwaiting!

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Your character is really cute! it's adorable how she's clumsy, especially around D.O. I like how D.O embarasses her all the time. Their relationship is interesting.▼  

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LEE DAMBI.
busy businessman. kim junmyun 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello, thanks for applying. Wow she is really hyper. lol. I love how her background is. Father called his daughter to work, daebak. hehe... I think Suho is too kind enough... lol.. Well there's nothing wrong with your form. So thank you again and hwaiting!

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hey, I really like this character. She's not cute or bubbly, but spoiled and admits she's annoying. Her and Suho really sound, what I think the busy businessman and his girlfriend should sound like. ▼  

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kwon jaemin.
VIRTUAL GUY. HUANG ZITAO 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hey Jamie. Wow your character is really young. Loves your habit and trivia. Don't worry, if you're chosen. I will write them all down. Lol... Tao has a interesting personality. good job. *nods* overall is good. sorry if my review is short. thanks and hwaiting!

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi, Jamie! She has a big personality haha. It's cool she was born in America. Your ulzzang is really pretty too! Her and Tao's relationship is cool too. Thank you for applying! ▼  

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KWON MINJEE.
desperate kingka. byun baekhyun 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Andreia! ert? Ohh... I love how to write ert members. lol.. excuse myself for talking nonsense. And baekhyun's personality, although it's short but we manage to get what it mean. overall it's good. Thanks and hwaiting!

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hello Andreia! Your character is really cute! I like how she's erted, it would be fun to write about. Min Jee and Baekhyun are cute. ▼  

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jo miyun.
COLD LONER. HUANG ZITAO 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Ching! Her personality really is bad. Good choice! lol.. Since we can't always have cute and bubbly one right? Ohh.... Tao's character is also very very cold. Cold loner seems to be very easy to write huh? lol.. I love it. Overall it's good. Thanks for applying. And do you mind if I use Jang Haebyeol? Just in case.

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi Ching~! I like her personality! She seems like a real badass. Her and Tao's relationship is comical and I like that. I can totally see myself writing about Mi Yun in the future~! Thank you for applying!▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 

 


 

YOO HYENA.
desperate kingka. park chanyeol 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Michelle, cute application you have there. lol.. Your habits are good. If you're chosen, I'll surely write every single habit you have there. lol. Your love interest part is okay. And the rival part, woah... daebak~ hmm... finally, thanks for applying. hwaiting!

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi Michelle! I really like this character! Her personality and background is really understandable. Thank you for being detailed. Chanyeol and her would be fun to write about! We will use your idea well~! Thanks for applying! ▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 


 

seo baekjoo.
COLD LONER. WU YIFAN 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Lou! Sorry for the late review! Her first gif is cute! Good personality you have there. And I love the family background, kinda strict though. Ooh... Kris's gif... You really wrote him very cold... *shivers* Thanks for filling this form with fun. and thanks for applying ^^

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi Lou! Thank you so much for applying! I really liked your character! She's really badass. I like how she's erted. It would be nice to write about her and Kris's relationship! Thank you again for applying!▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 

 


 

JUNG (KATY) KYUNG.
heartbroken guy. kim minseok 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Jami! Fashionista... interesting.. lol.. Btw, I love her dislikes. haha.. quite interesting. Good love story, I like it. How you can think of someone as his ex-girlfriend is good. ^^ Overall your apps are good. Sorry for giving such a short review. And if you're chosen, I'll definitely write the "kiss in the rain" scene for you.

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hello Jami~! First off, I really liked her personality because she's not cute and innocent but she's a spoiled Diva, it adds conflict. Xiumin and Kyung are really an interesting pair, and they would be fun to write about! Thank you so much for applying!▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 


 

xi liang.
HEARTBROKEN GUY. KIM JONGDAE 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Mimi, sorry for the late review. hehe.. first, your personality is detailed, and that is good. I kinda like her parents. lol. Love the trivia too! I'm kinda expert in seeing the love interest thing, so it's good. I love how the way you explain the things. Overall is good. ^^ Hmm.. can I use your back-up face claim because I see that she's more suitable. Thanks for apply.

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi Mimi! First off I really like your ulzzang, she's so pretty! Her personality is cute and I like your Love Rival! I also really like how you made Liang and Chen's relationship! Thank you so much for applying!▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 


 

HAN KAEUN.
busy businessman. kim junmyun 

` ( LUHANRIN ; ) Hello Rach. Wow.. She's kinda old. lol.. but nevermind. You did the personality good, you sorted it well, me likey. Well seriously? Both have A and B moment? I don't know why but I laughed at it. haha.. I'm sorry. Personal Pain in The ? What does that mean? lol... Good interaction Seohyun and Kaeun had. If you're chosen, I'll surely write this. Overall it's great! thanks for applying.

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hello Rach! Your app was really good! I like how you were detailed! Her personality is different and I really think it's cool, haha. Suho and Kaeun sounds like a really interesting couple, and if we choose her, I think she would be fun to write about. Thank you for applying. ▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 


 

kang shikhye.
DESPERATE KINGKA . KIM JONGIN 

` ( LUHANRIN ; )  Yo Jessie. Aww... Park Jihyun. My favorite ulzzang! I love your background actually which is weird. haha.. I don't know why but I love when you put Krystal as the love rival. haha.. maybe because you chose Jongin. Sorry if this review is short. And thanks for applying.

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi Jessie. First off,  Shikhye's personality is interesting, I like how she's competitive haha. She was a trainee for JYP? That's pretty cool! Kai and her relationship is good and I if we choose her, she would be fun to write about. Thank you for applying▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

Yoon Ae Cha.
HEARTBROKEN GUY . KIM JONGDAE 

` ( LUHANRIN ; )  ~~~

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hello Wadah~ Ae Cha really is sassy and I ike it~! Her personality is really out there. It would be fun to write about! The way you wrote Chen, I can see him being like that! Her love rival would be fun to write about with Ae Cha~! Thank you so much for applying!▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

Xue Su Yin.
BUSY BUISNESSMAN . KIM JOONMYEON 

` ( LUHANRIN ; )  ~~~

     

` ( SCENE_KILLER ; )  Hi Rin~! Thank you so much for applying! Suyin is very interesting. Her personality is cute haha, I like how she's childish. Her background is so sad! :(. Anyways her and Suho's relationship would be interesting to write about and if we choose her, we have a fun time writing it. Thank you for applying again~!▼  

( LISTEN GIRL, YOU'VE GOT TO BE GOOD. CREDIT. )

 

 

 

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Henry_Trap
#1
Chapter 12: Yay~ thank you for choosing me! I'll look forward to the story author-nims~
rolling-thunder #2
Chapter 12: Congrats to Katy!
softymochi
#3
Chapter 12: Congrats to Katy ! ^O^
--eryx
#4
Congrats Xiumei!
softymochi
#5
Chapter 11: Congrats to Li Xiumei!Can't wait for the rest!
rolling-thunder #6
Chapter 11: Congrats to Xiumei!! Can't wait to see more!
luvhpurple
#7
Chapter 10: congratulations!^^ *claps loudly like a crazy little kid*
--eryx
#8
Chapter 10: Waaaah! OHMYGOSH! I thought I wouldn't make it XD *does my little happy dance*
softymochi
#9
Chapter 10: Congrats to kaeun! ~~
rolling-thunder #10
Chapter 10: Congrats to Kaeun!