4 times jongdae said no, and 1 time he said yes.

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small drabble of chenkai that my friend requested.

it's short and i'd say, crappy fic.

lol

 

i used to read this style of fic on LJ before and decided to try writing this way.

any mistakes on grammar or spelling, ignore it okay.

:)

Foreword

4 times jongdae said no, and 1 times he said yes.

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Chenchenlay #1
Chapter 5: I agree with Mayica...Why Why...everybody can't give them a small happiness to these poor babies ????
Mayica
#2
Chapter 5: Why, why every ChenKai/KaiChen I read ends in a sad way? TT_TT And I don't even know if the girlfriend story was true, and why are you so deaf, JongDae, why oh why? ~cries hard. But it's ok, I guess. Not everything ends the way we want... WHY, JONGDAE, WHY?
And why am I reading this again? To suffer more, yes, I know. Haha, it's sad, yet great<3 ~GO, CHENKAI, GO, GO!
AnonButtNugget
#3
Chapter 5: nO
wHY
AUTHOR-NIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
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/cries
I'll just pretend that this is a cliff-hanger. nOpe. not the last chapter just a cliffhanger you no need to rreply I will waiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. /cries
AlienHeat05 #4
Chapter 5: ... TT
I thought about a happy ending here but you gave...sad ending? I don't know, but it ended just like that. Should i say it is a cliff-hanger? Because i don't know if jongdae really had a gf or, he was just pretending to be blind and deaf for jongin's feeling because he was afraid to be broken. Idk.

But i must say, i kinda like this ending. Not every story has a good ending, right? One may have bad/twisted ending like your story; the said feeling just went through the air with uncertainty, so it won't be boring.

Good job authornim ^^
AwkwardKpopLover
#5
Chapter 5: /breathes heavily/ I thought thIS WOULD BE HAPPY! D: UGH THIS MAKES ME SADDDDD, IM FRICKKIN WALLOWING IN PAIN! my ship. >~< BUT I REALLY LIKED THE SADDNESS IN THIS FIC.
ing
#6
Chapter 5: YES IS SO SAD
ohmy, there's not much ChenKai and you make this Chen blind and careless for Jongin ;----; so he'll never know his feels q.q. -kickschen-
//cries forever//
JoveanHara #7
Chapter 5: u just end this way authour-nim ?? i'm hoping for a continuation or sequel where they will end up together :'( hope to hear good news from u soon~
amnaa96kpoplover
#8
Chapter 5: asdfghjkl omg you just-- /speechless/ sobs poor jongin /hugshim/ ;uu;
i actually screamed bc of this -_-
and lol i'm just wondering abt whether the troll actually really has a gf or not hahaha /kicks him for breaking jongin's heart/