Artificiality

Description

Title: Artificiality

Genre: Angst, Friendship, Life/Death

Rating: PG-13, for depiction of blood.

Word Count: Part I - 4,326; Part II - 3,350; Total - 7,656

Summary: Chen is Kim Joonmyeon's crowning achievement. In a world that doesn't understand the relationship between android and human, Joonmyeon must protect his greatest accomplishment at any cost. But when Chen expresses his desire to be seen as more than a successful experiment, Joonmyeon must look at his own origins and admit his own glaring failures.

Tracklist

Part I

The Scientist - Coldplay

The A Team - Ed Sheeran

Drifting Away - LANGE feat. Skye

Stop and Stare - One Republic

Demons - Imagine Dragons

Part II

How To Save a Life - The Fray

In The End - Linkin Park

The River - Imagine Dragons

Iris - The Goo Goo Dolls

Foreword

SuChen Future!AU where Chen is a flawless android and Suho is a less-than-flawless scientist.

Inspired by this video, which has a robot singing about shining bright like a diamond. I don't know. It inspired me, okay?

Divided into two parts because 16 pages is a bit too long. So this is a twoshot.

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fallendevil_17 #1 Jul 11, 2014 21:44:41

Wah~ This is amazing! I love it! Good job authornim! =)

anneliesegyi #2 Dec 24, 2013 11:06:34

Chapter 2: For me, it could have been terribly sad when Suho died really, bcz I love him so much and I love SuCHen so much
But then you made everything right, with Suho being happy and content before he died, no sad sad ramblings from Chen but instead carried on so well and even optimistic about the next generation of Joonmyun....
I really enjoyed this
Thanks~ :D

akaashi #3 Nov 11, 2013 01:16:20

Chapter 2: wow the fact suho was a clone
wow slap yet firm claps for you for creating this amazing fanfic

thoughtless #4 Nov 4, 2013 15:08:53

Chapter 2: So at first I thought this was just a pretty mediocre android-and-human-fall-in-love kind of story. A well written one, but nothing more. Then I fell more and more in love with Chen's character. THEN you dropped that bomb about Junmyeon himself being an android, and after that you continue to rip my heart apart with his deterioration. But let's not forget that ending scene where you simultaneously gave me hope and drove me mad.
In other words, a job well done.

KKkkkk #5 Jul 10, 2013 09:54:08

Chapter 2: You made me cry I swear! specially when they fought. I was really crying why why did joonma have to die?!!! but anyways, I'm happy that Chen is having high hopes of creating a prefect clone of his creator. T_T hope you could make more suchen.
I love them and I love you for making his. T_T

Pls make more suchen. T_T

byungshinnn #6 Jul 10, 2013 05:28:04

lmao this story is really ...wow! i enjoyed it

EXOticOne94 #7 Jul 10, 2013 03:02:21

Chapter 2: IT'S 4 AM AND IM SOBBING! WHY DO YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME AN EMOTIONAL WRECK BEFORE I GO TO SLEEEEEEEP?!?
PLOT. ING. TWIST.
Suho was a clone?!? WAS. NOT. EXPECTING THAT!!! Holy god and fricking deteriorating from the inside out?!? I was confused at first but then it made sense!
When Chen took Suho to the lake and put the flower in his hair, I lost it. I LOST IT! I'm still crying now ~~ ommm maknae, I don't even know why you're crying, stop ~~
AND THEY WAY YOU SAID IT. Joonmyeon died. WELL THANKS FOR ING STABBING ME IN THE HEART!!! Holy god... My body and mind were not prepared. Nope.
BUT ALAS! THERE IS LIGHT AT THE END OF THE TUNNEL! Having Byunhi pregnant with another suho clone...thank you. Just thank you.
I love how Chen ended up really caring for Suho and was able to make him happy in the end!!! (Btw I noticed the hunhan reference just saying)
BUT CAN I TAKE A SEC TO MENTION ADORABLE LISPY THEHUN?! WHERE CAN I GET ONE?!? THE NEED IS GREAT!
Ok, anyway, this was awesome and I really enjoyed reading it!!! Like I always say, I love everything you write and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!! Curd hwaiting!!!

MusicLover14 #8 Jul 10, 2013 02:21:11

Chapter 2: Tears, tears, tears. So many tears. Why did he have to die?! It's not fair! But Chen is living on to perfect his cloning process which is beautiful. The fight they had...just tugged at my heart strings. And how Joonmyeon said that he had more fun with Chen than in his 26 years of life?! That KILLED ME! It was perfection! I loved it!

MusicLover14 #9 Jul 10, 2013 01:54:45

Chapter 1: Kraxlpiqqnlitbzeujlurli Omg this is so so beautifully written! Your attention to detail is always so so flawless! I love it so much!!
I love how Chen refers to Joonmyeon as Lab Coat. And of course Yi Fan didn't do anything for Lu Han. Lol, Jk! And how Chen's eyes are different and just everything!!! Onto part 2!