Prologue

Her Eternal Peter Pan

 

 

 

He was panting hard after a run. No, it wasn’t because of the run. It was because he was afraid of losing her. He didn’t want to lose her again, not after he has lost her soul.

            He was about to scream her name out loud but stopped when he saw a walking figure alongside the beach. He let out a sigh of relief. Without waiting for any longer, he ran to her as he hugged her from the back; shocking the girl for a second.

            “I’m glad that I’ve found you. I thought you’re gone. Do you know how glad I feel to see you here? Please don’t scare me anymore. My heart can’t take it to lose you,” he tightened the hug as he kissed her waving hair.

            There was a moment of silence before she spoke, “I’m sorry.”

 

 

 

 

 

That was indeed very short, I know. Just the prologue anyway (; There are lots to come so do anticipate! I'll be posting the rest soon if I'm not busy.

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soulle
#1
So sad that this fic has come to an end. I'll be missing this story filled with so many drama. Glad they have a happy ending. :) omji. Ara is so cute when she did her kisses to Chanyeol. And I like how you made Chanyeol a bit cheeky there. mehehe♥ oh yeah. Baekhyun's afterlife. LOLOL. I bet he's jumping like the fanboy he is for being with Taeyeon XD i love your story. I'll be waiting for your future Chanyeol x Ara fics. 8D haha. If you ever decide to make one again.
dear_awinnn
#2
Chapter 6: awww . So sweet !! You almost make me cried ! I love the sweet ending . ^^
nolovenolie #3
Chapter 6: A happy ending for everyone<3<3<3. I think the final chapter is the best of all. You were very succeed in describing how happy ara was when she met chanyeol. Yeol-ara finally end up together and baekhyun had his own happiness. Good job author-nim!!!
What about another yeol-ara story ( maybe funny story )author-nim? I'am always here supporting you^^
rion_01 #4
Chapter 6: Aw, nice and sweet ending for Ara and Chanyeol. Loved the short fic. Wished it would be longer though. ^^ So glad that Ara can finally accept Chanyeol after all these years. Btw, the ending's like scenes in korean dramas. lol But it never gets old, I'm still squealing like a fangirl. xD And thanks for sharing this fic with us, it's an enjoyable read but Baekhyun, was he in heaven or something? lol I wondered about him saying about freedom? lol Don't mind me. /slapped
Anywayy, congratulations for completing this fic. Hope to see you again in your other future ExoVenus fics~ <3
soulle
#5
Chapter 3: So many things happened already. I love this chapter, Chanyeol finally built the courage to express his true feelings. Not to mention the skinship they had at the last part. omf- ♥ T^T Ara, accept Chanyeol please.
rion_01 #6
Chapter 2: I love this fic so far. Wow, so many things happened at the beginning.. Ara should be strong. Well, since there is Chanyeol staying by her side, she is so lucky to have a shoulder to lean on. Especially he's the one who has the strongest connection with Baekhyun. Aw, I wish he didn't be so coward to say it to her out loud about his real feelings. I wonder if he started to develop any feelings for Ara before or after Baekhyun'a death.. If before, then that would be so sad.. He should gather up his courage and make Ara happy again. Ouh, but I'm a bit curious since you put Baekhyun as one of the main leads but actually he turned out to be dead in this fic? Maybe he'll still become the barrier for Chanyeol to attain Ara's heart? lol That probably explains the title of this fic >.< Hoping for ChanyeolxAra. :D
Awh, I just love angst and ExoVenus and definitely your writing style. I'm very looking forward to the future chapters. ^^ And sorry for spazzing too much xP
soulle
#7
Chapter 2: ARAAAAA! Dun kill yourself. A better dude is waiting for you over there. lmao <3
i love Chanyeol's thought. Wish he said it out loud :")
update soon authornim! :D
mochi143 #8
update update update!!! i LOVE EXOVENUS, especially chanyeol and ara
soulle
#9
omji. i like the title ♥ & it includes all my biases.
/currently addicted to exovenus/
hope you continue this. :D