One Year with Youngjae

Description

Ok, for the first time ever this story is going to have more chapters!  >< I couldn't work everything that I wanted into one. My friend wanted me to do a Youngjae fic for her, so I started one from a scenario that I seen.  ><   This first chapter is telling about the hard ships of being an idols girlfriend and all the fan girls.  Not saying that all of us fan girls are like this, but there are a few out there.  Anyways, feed back is always welcomed, I like to know what I can change to make my writing better!  ^^  So this is really the first fic that I have done with more than one parts to it.. I would like feedback if you have any.  I really hope that you all enjoy this one..it was kind of hard to write this one..

Foreword

            I could hear my phone start to vibrate on the nightstand, and the length of the vibrating phone told me that someone was calling me.  I didn’t even bother looking at the name as I rolled over and answered it sleepily.  “Hello,” I mumbled into the phone.

            “Sorry I woke you up,” the voice on the other end said soft and sweet.

            My eyes shot open when I heard his voice, Youngjae only called when he was checking in with me or if he had something big planned.  “It’s alright,” I reassured him.  I looked at the alarm clock and seen that I should have been up ten minutes ago anyways. “What’s up?” I asked, thinking that maybe it was going to be something wrong and not something he had cooked up in the short amount of time that he last talk to me.

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Hyeryungieee
#1
Chapter 3: Cute! The only thing you should watch out for is the noona/oppa usage. They can't be both. One has to be older. ^^
JungKristy
#2
Chapter 3: Sooo cuteee <3
littleschultzie
#3
>< Sorry it's taking me so long to get part two up for all of you..I've been busy trying to get my room in order to paint...so I'll try and work on it between dry time of paint this 4th of July weekend...please don't hate me for keeping you all in the dark so long..
yellow-p
#4
Chapter 1: Oh her big fear is Youngjae's fans and yeah, some are like that. I just think that maybe, poor them, for not being able to have a girlfriend in their life.
But btw, good story! The feel is really real! Like it :D update soon please ~ I'm curious would her 'date' be alright or... Yeah hope the bad thing wouldn't be happened between their time together hehe
fallenpatches #5
Chapter 1: oh good lord! I had a feeling that was where it was going ahah. There were a few mistakes you need to fix but overall I'm interested and I can;t wait to read more!