Long time friends and a new view of life

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Three new freshmen in college and two are long time friends fighting to keep the friendship that they have just that.  However, the two of them have been fighting to keep it that way for over a year now.  A few new friends have joined in, and are trying to get the long term love birds to just say that they are dating.  Himchan has openly asked his female friend what she would do if he asked her out, however, she never gives him a straight answer.  She is scared that her long time friendship with Himchan would be lost if the two of them dated and broke up.

(So my friend who has been reading my fics said that most of them are getting repetative on the writing and  try a new fling on writing style.  I've always at doing different type of writing styles, but if I want a minor in creative writing I need to brake out of the old and try something new for a change.  This one is Himchan, and Yongguk at college with the narator of the story (natrually I don't give a name to the main character because I like the reader to be in her shoes and not making it seem like it's the writer of the story in that spot ><) The narator and Himchan have been good friends for all there life, and Yongguk is the new comer in the group.  It's college setting and dorm hall living (YAY! for real life exsperiance on all this) so again, feed back is more than welcome on it, and any writing types is  the best thing an author can get. >< I really don't know how I feel about the ending, so feedback would be really great for the ending of it.)

Foreword

            Class had just gotten out for the day and I picked up my back pack when I felt it slowly being taken out of my hands.  I looked up to see Himchan smiling as he took it up and started to walk off with it.  “Oppa!” I cried out as I raced to keep up with him.

            Himchan and I had been good friends for all of our lives.  Our families had joked around saying that sooner or later we would break down and date each other.  So when the time came for us to look at colleges, we decided to go to the same one.  He was going in for music major, and I was going in for business management.  It was our dream to start a music company together and we had two different tastes on what we wanted to do for the company. I finally reached him and grabbed my bag out of his hands and slung it over my shoulder.  “I haven’t broken my arm yet this year oppa, so you don’t have to carry my bag for me,” I , as I pushed him slightly.

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