Alrighty then! Time for another review! Oh and look, it's 2Min with a side of (possible) Jongkey~ XD Here's your review, minsagi!

Poster: [4/5] That’s actually a really pretty picture but wouldn’t it be better to have a poster that incorporates 2Min? I mean, it’s your choice, it’s just a suggestion.

Description: [5/5] *pouts nonstop* The description literally ripped out my heart and stomped on it! JESUS! Poor Minho! *runs to hug him comfortingly* OH and it’s supposed to be, “Love exists in many forms and has no limits as to who it can correspond to. This is a story about how blindness is not a curse... but a blessing.” (the ‘...’ is for dramatic effect XD) You made some minor grammar and punctuation mistakes, I just cleaned it up. ^~^

Foreword: [5/5] No foreword posted. Neh, word of advice, you can post the whole “Young Minho and his mother” scenes as well as the “15 years later” part in the Foreword. That is literally what the Foreword is there for; it gives a sneak peak to the story OR gives a short prologue.

Background: [5/5] No background. Hey, why not add a 2Min picture?! Same reason as the poster. You don’t have to, of course, it is YOUR story but, if you add pretty pictures, it makes readers interested.

Introduction: [8/10] Hehehe I liked it! Minho getting up then getting called by Jjong was a pretty good start. But, you could have added some short little description where it showed how early it was. Mention how the sun had barely risen, blanketing the city of Amenoshi, stuff like that! Add some imagery to catch the reader’s attention! ^^

Organization/Spelling/Punctuation: [7/10] Alright, there were a FEW (mind you, I said FEW) spelling mistakes and punctuation mistakes. For example, there are random commas where they shouldn’t be. I’ll disregard those cause the story still made sense though. Now, there is one problem that irritates me to no end. *pauses for dramatic effect* YOU FLIPPIN USE TOO MANY PERIODS! Bro, it’s, “...” Not, “................................................................” Gawd! I hate when people do that! Only three! If you add too many, you lose the reader’s interest VERY quickly. Tone it down. The pauses can’t be THAT long. *temper tantrum*

Characterization: [10/10] I like how weak yet independent Taemin is. It just shows how much he doesn’t want to burden others and become stronger for himself! *nod of approval*. Minho is freaking adorable. Even though he went through such hardships, he’s still gentle and kind to others. *another nod of approval*. Jjong and Key are also like cute little fluffballs. Jjong is a hyper puppy (as usual) and Key is a protective Umma. Me like *yet another nod of approval* Crap, now my neck hurts~ Trish is just... just a meanie . *pouts*

Imagery/Dialogue: [16/20] Your imagery had moments where you made me get confused. Like, I didn’t really understand where Tae was. I knew he was standing outside in the snow but... where. Also, what the heck was happening during the thief vs. Minho scene? Who stabbed who? I got lost VERY quickly. Try to make it flow a bit more.

Plot Line: [28/30] Oh mah gawwwwdddd this story is so adorable yet so SAD! *ugly sobs* OH MAH GAWD! SAKI! *crying desperately* Stop, just stop! NUO! *runs off* … *comes back* Ok sorry about that... oh yeah! I took away a few points cause there were parts of the story that made me feel slightly confused. Yeah, tis all.

Total: [89 /100] YAY! Lol. I liked your story but I... I won’t be subscribing cause I’m a picky meanie . *nods*

Author: minsagi

Story: A Miracle

Genre: 2Min, Drama

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/322503/a-miracle-2min

Status: Ongoing

Description: Love exists in many forms and has no limits as to who it can correspond to. This is a story about how blindness is not a curse... but a blessing.