Chapter 6: Omg... awesome ! Again ! I liked even more how you didn't focus on just one country but wrote it like it could be everywhere. I could imagine Things even better through this.
Chapter 5: Awwww! That was cute! I did, however, notice on TINY grammatical error. You wrote, "How can possible you show him..." My assumption is that you meant to say, "How can you possibly show him..." or "How could you possibly show him..."
That's the only thing I noticed. It was a good drabble though! :D
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