Please Come Back To Me

Description

"You may now kiss the bride."

The man lean in towards his beautiful bride and whispered so softly that the girl almost missed it. "Thank you for coming into my life." And their lips met.

The 5 men in the audience, 3 crying, 2 holding back their tears, shouted and clapped happily.

A few streets away, at a cemetery, a man sat beside a white tomb and gently the top of the cold surface. "They are getting married today. My absence will be understood. Don't worry."

The man mumbled more incoherent words and suddenly broke down by the grave. "I miss you. I really really miss you... Please come back to me. . . " he cried. And his tears started to flow uncontrollably.

Foreword

This story has been with me for more than a year already. I took so long to decide if I should post it bcos I don't think it's not good enough... ): But I want to share it. (:

I have lost count of how many times I edited it. This story started with my friend and I not paying attention in class and we wrote one sentance each. After a few sentances, it became a paragraph and then a chapter. So it may sound a little nonsensical. My friend did the first few chapters with me and I continued.

Now that I've gratuated and a new school life just started, I don't have much free time and new ideas...but I'll try to finish the story.

Subscribers are welcomed, comments are love. Please don't be too harsh on me, it's my first time after so long. . .

Comments

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HearteuMaeum
#1
Chapter 5: Dun give up ^^ this is quite interesting! :D hahaha myungsoo's dorkiness and woohyun's jealousy is killing me hahah :D
krusty
#2
Author-nim, don't give up on this story. It is actually quite enjoyable. If you like writing and have a passion for it, then you should keep persisting with it. Writing a story is not all about the recognition you get from your readers and how many comments or views you receive. As long as you enjoy it, then us readers will feel that in your writing. Stay strong :)