The 200 pounds beauty goes slim.

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Might sound like a very common plot...but girl..or boy, it's gonna be spicy~~ Laughter, tears, romance, drama. Can you handle it all as Hani, The 200 pound beauty struggles to get her life on track and back to normal. Wait, when  can life be normal when  Super Junior and SHINee dorks are in the scene? 

This fic is purely AU (Alternate Universe) and the boys are NOT THOSE HEAVEN;Y IDOLS we drool over  die for. Their characters in the story will unfold as the story moves on. 

Foreword

"What are you trying to say, diva?"

"My dear fatso, what I'm trying to say is, what if you change your looks? you were rejected for your looks after all." there he said that and here I chocked on my dear chocolate pudding.

"Wait, wait, wait. You mean, you want me to change my looks?"

"Yes fatso. You're going to change your looks! For real! No kidding!"

"You mean, these spectacles, these braids, these braces, this fatty deposit, this figure of mine that I created after so much of hard work and chocolates, all of that?" 

"Yes nerd. And I'm dead serious." Key smirked. And I deadpanned. 

 

P.S.: A BIG THANKS to my lovely dongsaeng SaniKyu for the AWESOME poster <3

Disclaimer: I do NOT own any of the Super Junior members or SHINee members (I WISH I DID THOUGH!) but just Hani and a few other fictional characters and the story itself. Any resemblance to any story is purely coincidental and it's a story STRAIGHT out of my OWN HEAD! I have not disallowed text selection because I know a lot of readers have a habit to read with text selection. But that doesn't mean I'm allowing you to copy it.

PLEASE respect me as a writer and DO NOT REPOST, PLAGIARIZE or TRANSLATE my stories anywhere. I work really hard to come up with every single chapter and story so please doin't ruin it for me. If you want others to read this story, give them the LINK to it. And if you come accross my story being plagiarized by others, kindly inform me.

I never thought I'd be writing this ever but.....COPYRIGHTS RESERVED!

 

Author's Thoughts
ELF_Jewel
the next update might take quite sometime to b updated since I'm super busy atm.
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Ryukai #1
Chapter 3: I knew they were joking! HA! *pride*. This is cute! Their friendship is very nice!
Ryukai #2
Chapter 2: Damn xD this is humorous! I really like the sarcasm in the chapter and also Hani's general hunger pangs xD although her 'supportive' best friends make me suspicious :/ or maybe they're trying to teach her a lesson?

I noticed that your tenses changed many times within the chapter. But that was the only problem I saw.
Ryukai #3
Chapter 1: Wooo.I really see the improvement in your writing style!Though I was a little confused as to who was saying what though. Very confused in fact.kinda muddled right now :P

I've noticed that a lot of fics make Lee Joon the bad guy *sniffle* sad. Either way, it's alright.

I love Jonghyun's explainatiob as to why Hani isn't popular xD very detailed xD

Also its : "I'm going to commit suicide." Instead of "I'm suiciding" that's a very Indian thing to say :P

Either way *thumbs up and jumps to next chapter*
SaniKyu #4
Chapter 3: This chapter was just so heart warming dude! The chemistry between these 3 is mind blowing I tell you! It made me smile as well when Key and Jong were teasing her the whole time! x3
I loved that last part the most! Being thankful for having these 2 gorgeous friends and stating that she has no longer a crush on Joon. It's like a feeling of "moving forward"

I loved this chapter the most!! Update palli unni!!
Hwaiting!!
SaniKyu #5
Chapter 2: Haha! Helping to suicide!! That so gives the feel of two best friends being sarcastic and funny!! Loved this one xD *thumbs up*
I can actually imagine the whole chapter in a drama form! Great work!
Innocentbubble #6
Chapter 3: Lollzz *laughing like hell* you are AWESOME I love these friends lolzz there plans OMG * again laughing*
I LOVE your story:) Update soon author-nim:)
Innocentbubble #7
Chapter 2: Lolzz I love friends they are so supportative its hard to find these kind of friends * laughing like hell* they are so funny their best friend is going to suicide and what? Hhehehehehe lolzz update soon :)
Innocentbubble #8
Chapter 1: I loved it how supportive yhe friends are kekekek lolzz update soon :)
Janis_ELF #9
Loved it~ <3
Unnie please update sooon ne?

Cant wait! =D
SaniKyu #10
Chapter 1: Unni , I am going to be honest here.
I almost cried. Because I experienced something like that. Though I never confessed and forgot about him without letting 'him' know.
Those insulting words as well. And the feeling after hearing them. I totally understand. People talk on your back and talk sweet on your face when you are needed and then throw you away like a 'dirt bag' later on after using.
I loved the first chapter! Not everyone can understand a chubby person's point of view so easily! I am impressed (^_^)
Anticipating the next chapter! Update palli!! Hwaiting!!
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