The beginning

The 200 pounds beauty goes slim.

 

Hani's POV

“Go away you ugly !” he said with a scowl on his face.

“W-what?” I couldn’t help but stutter.

“Go and get your face and body done. How could you even think of confessing to me with that figure of yours? Have you ever seen yourself in the mirror? My maids are far more prettier, hotter and good looking than you can ever imagine to be in many lifetimes of yours to come.”

“S-sstop”

“Why? Can’t hear the ugly truth? Listen to this clearly. Your whole ugly face is covered behind all that fat and ugly braces that do a perfect job to make you look even uglier than you already are.” A smirk stretched over his lips that I once dreamed of losing my first kiss to.


“S-sttop. Stop right t-there.” I stuttered un-controllably as tears streamed down my face…ugly face, as he said.

“Hmph! Don’t even dare show me that face of yours again. Ruined my whole mood.” He spat some more venom on my bruised heart.

“Come on Joon hyung. Why waste time on some ugly duck when you’ve got hot chicks waiting for you inside?” his friend entered the harsh conversation

“You’re right Mir. Let’s go.” Saying this, the prince of my dreams; who just turned into the devil of my nightmares; went inside the school. I couldn’t digest what just happened to me and I couldn’t help but collapse on the floor as more tears escaped my eyes; now staining my glasses as I bowed my head down and cried nonstop.

“All those sweet talks, all those praisings; now that I think about them; were nothing but all a façade.” My bestfriend stated while kneeling down to my eye level.

“F—faç—çade?” I managed to say between my painful sobs.

“To get their works done and to pass with good grades.” He continued.

“W—why *hick* *hick* me?” I hiccupped.

“Let’s see. A nerd; who’s a topper, weights 200 pounds and has no friends except me and Yeobo—because we are awesome like that—, with teeth covered by braces and eyes by nerdy spectacles, wanted by no one but the teachers and me and Yeobo—again, wearing tidy and unrevealing uniform—you have ugly thighs by the way. Too much fat underneath that fair skin—and two plaids tied in a way that makes her enormously long hair look medium and is almost always accompanied by me and Yeobo and a bunch of heavy scientific books. There, that’s a description just right for you.” He listed.

“Wow Yeobo. Some great and apt analyzing there.” Key jumped into the conversation like he always does; as a ninja. “But that’s not called ‘calming someone’ there.” He added while making those double coated signs as I removed my spectacles and cleaned them with my frock’s edge. I can see the things closer to my eye level a little blurred if not wearing my spectacles. Or else, I’m totally blind without them.

“Just being honest to my only female bestfriend there, Yeobo.” Jonghyun replied.

“Point noted.” Now continue.” Key said after nodding to what Jjong said. The two helped me up and guided me to a bench nearby and Jjong took my spectacles from my hands and placed them gently on my eyes.

“Now the part of ‘why you the target.’ It’s clear, isn’t it? A topper who practically doesn’t really have anyone who cares about her won’t be a threat to pretty girls and a simple girl who will do just anything she thinks is right to gain some friends; you were the safest option to go with. And when that girl; I mean you, is approached by a so-called Prince Charming— who also happens to be the son of one of the school trustees— is the one producing a friendly hand, then a girl like that will no doubt be floating on cloud 9.”

“Interesting. Continue” amusement visible in that diva’s voice...

“The result now. You started doing what any idiotic nerd— no offence to nerds out there— in love would do.”

“I wasn’t in love.”

“Oh yes , you were. I’m your best friend Hani-ah. I notice everything about you.”

“OK fine. Might be a crush.” Key interjected.” Now continue.”

“Where was I? yup. I remember. You started doing what a person in love would do. You supplied him with your precious notes that you made with extra hard work; with hearts and smileys and decorations there.”

“And you said you weren’t in love.” That diva scoffed.

“You started serving him and his group of friends. What’s their name again? M Blue?”

“MBLAQ!” I interrupted out of instincts.

He eyed me weirdly upon my interruption. “ Yeah. M Black. You started serving them like a personal maid. The result you ask? A boy who always managed to get promoted to the next grades just because he was the son of a trustee; secured third topper’s place! Now isn’t that ridiculous?” he scowled.

“I did all that?” How naïve could I have been?

“”But then again, if the guy was getting so many benefits, why the today’s incident then?” Key raised the question I wanted to ask.

“Because this lady happened to confess her love to him; which might have not been in the plan of the Prince Charming. Here she confessed to him and there he discarded her like an old used bag.” Now being called ‘an old used bag’ seriously hurts…

“There, there. The whole story is laid out in front of you. What have you got to say now, Hani-ah?”

“That I don’t deserve to live anymore.”

“What!?” the two guys a.k.a. my best friends chorused.

“Isn’t it right? I’m fat, ugly and lonely. Not wanted by anyone excluding you two. A topper but with no real social life. All I do all day and night is eat, study, sleep and the cycle goes on. I empty half of the kitchens of almost all the places I go to eat. Wow, I never realized I’m pretty much of a parasite.” I sadly stated.

“You finally realized what you’ve been doing but,” said Jjong

“The conclusion is totally wrong.” Key completed.

“It’s decided. I’m suiciding.” I finished

“That look…” Key

“Is scary…” Jjonghyun

“Fine. We’re helping.” Both chorused excitedly. Wow, such supportive best friends I got there. It’s a sarcastic comment please.

“It’s all the places actually.” Key said after we got off the bench. I eyed him questioningly. “You empty half of the kitchen of all the places you go to eat at.” He clarified. Thank you buddy. Way to be straight forward… 

 

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There! You got your first chapter of the fic! Now raid me with comments ELFs and SHAWOLS~~ <3 

The next chapter will be updated upon the responses I get...or not. I'm unpredictable so I can't be sure. 

P.S.: Don't kill me for making Joon and the lovely MBLAQ guys as the bad ones here. It's just that they kinda suited this role better than the other options I considered. And Joon STRIKINGLY fits in the description of the spoilt rich playboy I wanted to portray. MBLAQ will be having short appearances here and there.

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Ryukai
#1
Chapter 3: I knew they were joking! HA! *pride*. This is cute! Their friendship is very nice!
Ryukai
#2
Chapter 2: Damn xD this is humorous! I really like the sarcasm in the chapter and also Hani's general hunger pangs xD although her 'supportive' best friends make me suspicious :/ or maybe they're trying to teach her a lesson?

I noticed that your tenses changed many times within the chapter. But that was the only problem I saw.
Ryukai
#3
Chapter 1: Wooo.I really see the improvement in your writing style!Though I was a little confused as to who was saying what though. Very confused in fact.kinda muddled right now :P

I've noticed that a lot of fics make Lee Joon the bad guy *sniffle* sad. Either way, it's alright.

I love Jonghyun's explainatiob as to why Hani isn't popular xD very detailed xD

Also its : "I'm going to commit suicide." Instead of "I'm suiciding" that's a very Indian thing to say :P

Either way *thumbs up and jumps to next chapter*
SaniKyu
#4
Chapter 3: This chapter was just so heart warming dude! The chemistry between these 3 is mind blowing I tell you! It made me smile as well when Key and Jong were teasing her the whole time! x3
I loved that last part the most! Being thankful for having these 2 gorgeous friends and stating that she has no longer a crush on Joon. It's like a feeling of "moving forward"

I loved this chapter the most!! Update palli unni!!
Hwaiting!!
SaniKyu
#5
Chapter 2: Haha! Helping to suicide!! That so gives the feel of two best friends being sarcastic and funny!! Loved this one xD *thumbs up*
I can actually imagine the whole chapter in a drama form! Great work!
Innocentbubble
#6
Chapter 3: Lollzz *laughing like hell* you are AWESOME I love these friends lolzz there plans OMG * again laughing*
I LOVE your story:) Update soon author-nim:)
Innocentbubble
#7
Chapter 2: Lolzz I love friends they are so supportative its hard to find these kind of friends * laughing like hell* they are so funny their best friend is going to suicide and what? Hhehehehehe lolzz update soon :)
Innocentbubble
#8
Chapter 1: I loved it how supportive yhe friends are kekekek lolzz update soon :)
Janis_ELF
#9
Loved it~ <3
Unnie please update sooon ne?

Cant wait! =D
SaniKyu
#10
Chapter 1: Unni , I am going to be honest here.
I almost cried. Because I experienced something like that. Though I never confessed and forgot about him without letting 'him' know.
Those insulting words as well. And the feeling after hearing them. I totally understand. People talk on your back and talk sweet on your face when you are needed and then throw you away like a 'dirt bag' later on after using.
I loved the first chapter! Not everyone can understand a chubby person's point of view so easily! I am impressed (^_^)
Anticipating the next chapter! Update palli!! Hwaiting!!