A Love Story? Is It Really Like One Though?

Description

 This story evolves around the obvious love life of these two classmates and friends. The only problem is that they are to oblivous to it. In short terms they are hopeless fools in love.

 

 Lee Donghae is 12 years old this year just starting middle school. She's in love with her ex-friend who is known as a total jackass to her friends Lee Eunhyuk.

 Lee Hyukjae aka Eunhyuk is 12 years old as well, he's also Donghae's ex-friend as well.

 

 Donghae and Eunhyuk have been going to the same school since they were in 3rd grade.When they became friends in 3rd grade many people started to think the two liked each other.Now the two are in 6th grade and don't even talk to each other, what happened between them?

 

A/N: This story is based on 'someones' real life

 

 

Foreword

Donghae POV (now 6th grade)

-Before 1st period-

"You two are perfect together!" said Heechul

"No we are not! He's not my type anyway!" yes he is he's my exact type and I love him

 I said that last part in my head.

So right now I just wrote down a list of what I look for in a guy/ ideal guy. The only results I got were 2 for my ex-boyfriend Siwon, and ing 10 for my ex-friend Eunhyuk. I told myself I was completely over him!

"LEE DONGHAE! What part of this is not like him? 'wild, semi-violent, bipolar, quiet and loud, somewhat arrogant, unique, smart, mature, immature, and artistic'!" said my other friend Sungmin

"Sungmin lemme see that!" said Tiffany as she snatched the paper out of Sungmin's hands. When she finished reading she just looked at me.

"This is just the guy version of you!" she yelled

"It's Eunhyuk! Doesnt Eunhyuk act like this?" yelled Heechul and Sungmin. Now those two usually don't get along but if they can speak in unison like that then they must really think so.

"It's not him! It can't be him!" I said aloud but that last part I meant to say in my head

"Why can't it be him?" they all asked looking at me confused

"Because it just can't ok?" I said as I quickly snatched the paper and ran to the bathroom while trying to hold in my tears.

"Why can't I just give up? Why him? Why?I told myself to stay strong and just let him go. Why can't I do that? Why now? I've done this for years but why can't I let it go?" I said as I locked myself inside the bathrooom hugging my knees while crying my eyes out till the bell rang for 1st period to start.

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Hyukhae_is_real #1
Chapter 13: Kyaaaaaaaa, Hyukkie oppaaaa and his baby girl Hae are so cuteeeee ^____^
They're so stupid, they love each other but none of 'hem has confessed yet *pout*
Pleeeeeeaaseeeee, author nim update, i want to know how they'll end up together ^^
Forest_pixi
#2
Chapter 13: ok then...I really think you need to organize your thoughts better when writing. I got confused sometimes in terms of he timeline, scene changes, etc. The plot was basic, so I saw what you were going for. So far anyway.

I think you mentioned too many, unimportant characters that sort of made the story feel really random.

Taking into consideration that you were writing based on a real life experience, it would have been better to stick to the KEY people in the story instead of trying to mention everyone.

Work on showing the relationship between the characters to make it feel less like "name-dropping" and more like a narrative.

Anyway! Keep up the good work! Happy Writing!!
voiladeux
#3
Chapter 14: W-what ? Why ? Dont be like this :(
exo_baozi #4
Chapter 14: Stop it! You dont have to do this!!!
exo_baozi #5
Chapter 13: lol you are such a dork :p
aidenparadise #6
Kangteuk is so sweet..
Wonder when eunhae will be together for real
aidenparadise #7
Chapter 12: Are they ok now?
CallMehhBubz #8
Chapter 11: I just realized that you said that Heechul was eating Takis... I'm eating Takis right now... o.0
CallMehhBubz #9
Chapter 9: Hahaha!! A" ____-I'm-basically-your-mom" look
aidenparadise #10
Chapter 8: Hyuk please be jealous...