Winter Break

A Love Story? Is It Really Like One Though?

Donghae POV

  Today is December 14 and I'm now starting winter break! That means no school for 2 weeks! But I'm kinda sad because I won't be able to see my friends but at least I have some of their phone numbers.

  I'm walking to the street next to my school to wait for my step dad to pick me up (because he's lazy to go to my school). While I'm walking, I'm walking with Eunhyuk and his friends. Eunhyuk has been one of my best guy friends since 3rd grade. Anyway we're both walking with his other friend Junsu and some 7th graders I don't know their names though.

  While I was about to sit down in my regular spot, which is under a tree at the park near my school, Eunhyuk suddnely dropped his bag on the cement infront of the road and jogged towards me. He took his phone from his pocket and sat down next to me. Luckily his other friends left or else we would both get major teasing.

 "Don't you have to walk to the bus station?" I asked because that's what he usually did.

 "Nope not today my auntie is gonna pick me here." he said as he was playing with his phone (I think).

 Suddenly he put his arm around my shoulder and took a picture of us. But before he took it I made sure to make a 'v' sign. Can't blame me it's my signature pose.

 "Look!" he said as he showed me the picture. Him and his gummy smile and me and my 'v' sign. As he was smiling I couldn't help but smile at him, he usually smiles but this is more like a innocent smile. I haven't seen this in a while.

 "Why are you looking at me like that?" he asked pulling me out of my thoughts, while looking at me. I could feel my face heating up so I turned my head away

 "I wasn't!" I said trying to calm down

 "Ok.... Do you like dogs?" he asked. I love dogs.

"Yup dogs are so cute, my favorite dog is a pug." I said just imagining the fat faced dogs

"Look." he showed me a picture of a pig sleeping

"Soo cute~" I said

"Do you have a phone?" he asked

"Yeah why?"

"Can I get your number?" he asked

"Sure" then he handed me his phone and I put my number in it.

Then he took away his arm from my shoulder and got up heading to a silver car with a gigantic pug in the back seat.

 "Bye Donghae I'll text you later!" then he hopped in the car leaving me blushing like crazy.

If you haven't noticed I like him, well over the years it kinda turned from like to love. I'm trying to figure out why though. He's arrogant, semi-violent, bi-polar, but sometimes really innocent.

-A few days later-

Lately I've been texting Eunhyuk so much that he almost filled up all of my memory. But one night he sent me a text saying 'Leave me alone! Forget my number and don't text me'. His normally personality is usually mean but I hate him when  he's like this. I couldn't do anything then I thought of a saying that goes like 'If you truly love someone you let them go.' and I did exactly that.

But before I did I couldn't help but feel hurt and unwanted. That night I silently cried myself to sleep.

 

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Hyukhae_is_real #1
Chapter 13: Kyaaaaaaaa, Hyukkie oppaaaa and his baby girl Hae are so cuteeeee ^____^
They're so stupid, they love each other but none of 'hem has confessed yet *pout*
Pleeeeeeaaseeeee, author nim update, i want to know how they'll end up together ^^
Forest_pixi
#2
Chapter 13: ok then...I really think you need to organize your thoughts better when writing. I got confused sometimes in terms of he timeline, scene changes, etc. The plot was basic, so I saw what you were going for. So far anyway.

I think you mentioned too many, unimportant characters that sort of made the story feel really random.

Taking into consideration that you were writing based on a real life experience, it would have been better to stick to the KEY people in the story instead of trying to mention everyone.

Work on showing the relationship between the characters to make it feel less like "name-dropping" and more like a narrative.

Anyway! Keep up the good work! Happy Writing!!
voiladeux
#3
Chapter 14: W-what ? Why ? Dont be like this :(
exo_baozi #4
Chapter 14: Stop it! You dont have to do this!!!
exo_baozi #5
Chapter 13: lol you are such a dork :p
aidenparadise #6
Kangteuk is so sweet..
Wonder when eunhae will be together for real
aidenparadise #7
Chapter 12: Are they ok now?
CallMehhBubz #8
Chapter 11: I just realized that you said that Heechul was eating Takis... I'm eating Takis right now... o.0
CallMehhBubz #9
Chapter 9: Hahaha!! A" ____-I'm-basically-your-mom" look
aidenparadise #10
Chapter 8: Hyuk please be jealous...