*Kymori  |  How To Save a Life   

   Title   

It is eye catching but we have yet to see how it relates to the story. 

  Foreword/Description  

Interesting use of images for your description and the lack of words makes it really intruging to read on. 

  Plot  

We liked how the story actually started impactfully with her riding on an airplane leaving the country.  We also liked how we are able to find out something new with more chapters; it is like a puzzle piece slowling coming together. We felt that it is a good way to keep the readers on their toes. Keep it up!

    Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation   

Chapter 2:

We wondered the streets of Seoul...

We wandered the streets of Seoul...

Chapter 4:

I laid in bed, ...

I lay in bed, ...

Note - You make this mistake in Chapter 5 as well.

Chapter 5:

I fell asleep, and ended up...

I fell asleep and ended up...

Note: You need not put a coma seeing how the word 'and' is already a connecter.

Chapter 10:

He was smirked at me, ...

He was smirking at me, ...

OR

He smirked at me, ...

  Character Development  

Right now, the characters from the big three are kind of mysterious. We are interested to see how they will actually impact the story in later chapters. Kyung Soon seems to have an on-and-off relationship with her father so we are really curious to know why  their relationship had turned this way.

Potrayal of Niel is cute. He seems to favor and has an instinct to take care of the Main Character even though he doesn't show it. 

We would really like to know about Sohee, CL and Exo to see how they will contribute to the story.

  Ending 

Since you have yet to complete the story, we couldn't give you a review here. Do come back again should  you want a review to your ending. (:

  Additional Comments 

It was kind of difficult to read through the story with the ever changing fonts size and it takes our attention away from the plot. Do make sure that you make the appropriate changes and remember to check whenever you update a new chapter. 

Anyway, we had fun reading your story so do not give up! (✿◠‿◠)