*PrincessHades  | Love and Dreams   

   Title   

Honestly, we feel that it is a nice title. It complements well with your poster and the title gives off this really romantic vibe.

  Foreword/Description  

We think that the long character introduction wasn't needed. This might seems strange but we could actually have a rough idea of how this story will turn out. Lesser description of your character in your foreword would make them more mysterious and would allow readers to want to find out more. 

Instead of putting the character's description, why not put a short glimpse of their past? Interactions between characters could also be a good thing to put inside your foreword and capture your readers' attention.

  Plot  

We like how you ended the chapter with a sense of mystery and suspense. It make us want to read more to find out what is going to happen. The plot wasn't what we expected it to be and we had thought that it was going to be another 'Prince Charming' story based on the first few chapters. You proved us wrong and we didn't expect the twist coming. A job well done!

    Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation   

For this part, we felt that you have done a great job in it! We did not spot any glaring mistakes, so keep up the good work!

  Character Development  

You make your 'y' characters really despicable and that is good because we have never hated such characters so much in a fanfic. However, we really didn't like the cliche characters that you have choosen to use as bullies in this fic. This is because it is something that have been overdone so it gets boring/frustrating after some time.

Luhan's character potrayal was realistic, we could imagine a character like that in real life. We like how he hurts himself just to protect Hyunae, it gives him an extra layer instead of just being the pretty boy who falls in love with the main character eventually.

  Ending 

Since you haven't conclude the story yet, we couldn't give you a review here. Do come back again should  you want a review to your conclusion. ^^

  Additional Comments 

You actually managed to keep our attention and we are really interested to see how the ending goes. Do continue the story and don't give up!   (✿◠‿◠)