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PrincessHades #1
Chapter 5: Hey! Thanks for the review! ^^ I seriously think that you guys were too kind! XD
I really appreciate you guys reviewing my story. :) I'll credit you later ^^

P.S About the Luhan character, it was actually based on a real person and his character and I chose Luhan because their characters are almost the same. :) I'll definitely come back when I'm done with this story. :)
evilmagnae91 #2
Chapter 4: I've changed the mistakes you point out, and yeah, and I know, I'm really really really bad at tenses. Thanks again and sorry for my previous reply, I was a little sick, so it does sounds a little stiff right? ^^ Again, I appreciate your review and will try better in next chapters :) <3
Kymori #3
Title: How to Save a Life

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/407394/how-to-save-a-life-bigbang-shinee-teentop-groups-gangsterau

Main Characters: Niel (Teen Top) OC

Genre: Angst, Comedy

No. Of Chapters: 8

Status: On-Going

Additional Information: Nope :)

Password: seizetheday
evilmagnae91 #4
Chapter 4: Thanks for your review, I appreciate it, will try to correct it soon since I'm a little busy with real life these days. Thanks again.
LynZy_G #5
Chapter 3: Thank you for such a constructive review! I was all hyped up inside and shivering before, while and after reading your review. I Definitely learned a lot of pointers! Keep up the good work in helping fellow writers. Fighting! ;D
evilmagnae91 #6
Title: Miss Straight A's VS Mr.(Not So) Perfect
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/391701/miss-straight-a-s-vs-mr-not-so-perfect-comedy-jinwoon-romance-seohyun-snsd-yonghwa-yongseo
Main Characters: Seohyun, Yonghwa, Jinwoon, Hyoyeon
Genre:Romance, Comedy
Status: Ongoing
Additional Information: Not sure where I should put the password, but just in case, it's seizetheday
foreverdaragon #7
Chapter 2: Thanks for the review! I make some obvious mistakes (like spelling..for example, the Seungri one), because I don't edit much..Thank you so much for taking time to point out my errors! :) I'll be sure to come back soon.
beautinity #8
Title: My Co-Workers Are...Animals?!
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/316179/my-co-workers-are-animals-comedy-fantasy-romance-you-exo-exok-exom
Main Characters: OC, EXO-K, EXO-M
Genre: Comedy, Romance, Fantasy
Status: ongoing
Additional Information: Please be as harsh as you want^^ password: seizetheday
PrincessHades #9
Title: Love And Dreams
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/351803
Main characters: OC, Luhan, Kai and somewhat Baekhyun.
Genre: Romance
Status: Ongoing
Additional Information: Just take your time because I don't like to rush people. >< Please tell me the truth. I'm afraid to be hurt but I know I can improve after hearing the truth. I'm looking forward to the review! Hwaiting! ^^ Oh and the password is seizetheday. (You thought I forgotten about it, right? XD)
LynZy_G #10
Requested. Thanks in advance!... ^^
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