REVIEW from Kaleidoscope Kreations
Shadow of an Angel
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KALEIDOSCOPE KREATIONS REVIEWS
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Saturday, December 11, 2010, 9:00 PM
Shadow of an Angel
Story Title: Shadow of an Angel Reviewer: Melissa Title: 5/5 - Nice! Dark yet somewhat light! (shadow-dark Angel-light!) Background/Poster: 5/5- the light blues with the black make it look like a sad story with lots of drama. So far, I'm expecting a sad storyline. Forewords:10/10- OOOOOOHHHHhhhhh! Sounds soooo interesting!!! I can't wait to read it!!! Plot:15/15- Nicely done! Problems develop slowly and nice variety of description words! I like how you don't have to tell the readers that he's an angel, it's already implied. Creativity/Originality:15/15- Original, and creative! What more can I say? Flow:8/10- I felt that there wasn't enough explanation of some characters in your story, like the bully at the beginning. How do they know each other? And why is she being bullied so much? Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary:10/10- I found few spelling mistakes. Good job! Characterization:15/15- Characters are developed nicely and clearly. Writing Style:10/10- Really pulled me in with your writing! Good choice of vocabulary and descriptions are good! Overall enjoyment: 5/5 Total: 98/100 Labels: Melissa
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