After The Fire

Description

Hey everyone, it's me again!
This is After the Fire,
the sequel to I Just Can't Let You Go.
 
 
 
    Lizzie and Eli haven't been married two years yet.  Already, they are experiencing many problems in their marriage.  Will it all be too much and break the couple apart, or will they be able to get through it for the sake of their child?
 
*Also, on the picture, it says my old username LizzieGirl5175. I will redo the picture eventually, but, for now, I just want to get the Description and Foreword up.

Foreword

    There were bright lights everywhere.  That's all anyone could see in the room.  It was reminescent of Hana's birth with the chemical smell of the sterilized room.  Bad memories were associated with places like that.  It was no shock that we didn't want to be there.

    "I will always love you, no matter what, ok?  Can you remember that?"

    "I'll keep it in my heart, even if you forget.  And Eli?"

    "Yeah baby?"

    "I love you, too."

ElizabethKim_MrsEliK
I need constructive criticism when I update...so when I do...PLEASE FREAKING LEAVE COMMENTS (Raven..just tell me at school...)

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The_Dreamer #1
Update soon!^^
ChickenLover #2
Chapter 6: You must've had fun writing this chapter ;) lol *cue y time*
If you're y and you know it, put your hands up~

though Eli's hair for the comeback kinda ruins the mood lol xD
ChickenLover #3
Chapter 5: Erai! You urghhhh lol there's so much love in this fanfic xD and Liz is so forgiving. I know he was dying but I'd probably cause the biggest drama lol make my cheating hubby suffer and beg for my forgiveness xD and then it'd probably turn into a $mut lmao

Ah man but this is interesting~ update whenever. Lol I prewrite my chapters too! XD helps when you're lazy...
KissMeLi
#4
Chapter 5: It's better, but they have challenges to face still...
KissMeLi
#5
Chapter 4: It's depressing Unnie. T.T
Why you make Eli almost die?
It not funny. >.<
XxidarkrainxX
#6
Chapter 3: Yah Eli really did mess up. :/ At least Lizzy has her amazing brothers ^-^
ChickenLover #7
Chapter 3: And of COURSE I subscribed XD It's the sequel to an amazing story ;D
ChickenLover #8
Chapter 3: He cut... urgh don't cut yourself >_<;; I feel sick now... I really can't stand blood shedding. I really do wonder how Eli is going to get Liz back though.. it's not easy :(
KissMeLi
#9
Chapter 3: xDDD At first it says I'm Roy (M).
That's funny Unnie.
But the story... =(
Eli Oppa is a pabo...
The_Dreamer #10
Chapter 2: Please update soon :)