→ Reviewed by; sarang_sheshii

→ Title; 3/5

      The title of the story was frankly common. But it can keep a reader wondering what's will be the life with your boyfriend right?  

★★★☆☆

→ Foreward & Description; 6/10

       For the forward and description. It was short but its okay since its just oneshot. But i really like author who write some teasers at the front. I don't know why HAHAHA.  

★★★★★★☆☆☆ 

→ Display/Appearance; 6/10

        The poster was great. Showing some hunhan sweetness and it was kinda plain too which was kinda okay. The only problem i am thinking here is the font/text choice at the beginning it was a lil bit irritating but it's kinda okay too and can  you arrangged the REVIEW section because its so messy too look at.

 ★★★★★★☆☆☆

→ Characters; 7/10

         EXO's Lu han and Se hun pr HuhHan. One of the OTP's EXOTICS chose may fans writes fanfics about them too and i think they compliment your story ★★★★★★★☆☆

→ Plot/Originality; 10/15

          Your fic. was okay the plot might be like the other stories but it's okay though. Your plot is like the other readers first think when they want to creat character on a deep rs like that. Another thing to improve your shot try adding some twist readers like that.  

★★★★★★★★★★☆☆☆☆☆

→ Grammar/Spelling; 14/15

          I had no problems with it, since it was already changed and improved.  

★★★★★★★★★★★★★★☆

→ Writing Style; 6/10

          Your writing style was good . It was improved by the corrections but i feel you have something that you want the readers to understand in your story. 

★★★★★★☆☆☆☆ 

→ Flow; 5/10

           I was expecting the ending would be someone would die because its too obvious on the middle part. But the flow was good unlike the others who confused readers.  

★★★★★★☆☆☆☆

→ Enteratainment; 5/10

          I was entertained at some parts but get bored also in others. And the sweetness is flowing.

 ★★★★★☆☆☆☆☆

→ Bonus; 3/5

           Just wanna add you a 3 points. Since it takes me like a century to update. MIANHAE. -___-  

★★★☆☆

→ TOTAL; 65/100 

sheshii notes ; Well sorry for taking it so long.  -___-