Hohoemi

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A Continental war has broken out between Asia and Russia. There are massive shortages within the combined army forces despite the large Asian population, the Russian arms legacy making itself known in the heat of the battle. Governments are pleading to their citizens to come forth and lay down their lives for the sake of their freedom. From the rich down the ladder, they are drawing their manpower. Now, Korean, Japanese and Chinese idols alike are pulled from the stage and onto the battlefield. They must undergo training in order to serve their countries.
 

Foreword

Kyo's gaze followed the narrow eyed Korean across the tent. The Han sat on his neatly made bunk, gaze seeming to fight the urge to connect with the iron of the bed's bottom frame -- where the survival were laid bare for all to see. No more than six were chisled into the black metal. The young man was slouched, head tilted as if it was only the bare minimum of respect that stopped it from hanging completely in despair. 

"He'd known, somehow," a deep voice ghosted into his ear from his left. Kyo didn't have to turn around to know it was Gackt. "The dead one, I mean. He'd confessed to not being able to last a week on the battlefield."

There was a moment of silence between the two, the only sounds otherwise being the cacaphony of men being called out to the field for patrol and drills. 

"Tamerai ni hohoemi," Kyo finally spoke. Gackt had seemed to wait on more, but the shorter Japanese singer didn't elaborate. 

"All he ever did was smile," a light tenor joined in. Gackt glanced to his left to see Jun Ki standing off to the side, arms folded and long eyes fixated on the desolate soldier on the bunk. "And now it's fading..."

 

 

"....Captivated me immediately...Their feelings and emotions are just perfect...It was perfection and if continued like that....wow..." - CloudyDremer [Meme Grande Review Sanctuary]

"...So new and refreshing...I want to laud your creative way of writing..." - ThreeCheers [Ambiguity Review Shop]

 

 

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This is a self-apology fic for failing the first real attempt at writing something angsty. It turned out to be its own pivotal point between angst and horror and dark. It's like genre backlash in that competition that I'd entered. But I guess this one's going to make up for it. I sincerely hope that you enjoy this little re-do of my genre hiccup. 

ThatOneOtherWriter
ATTN! Europe is no longer the adversary. It's Russia, 'cause...yeah.

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grease-me-nam
#1
Chapter 1: DEI IM ANTICIPATING
skylarks
#2
Chapter 1: Finished your review, sorry it took so long! >< Please comment and let me know when you've read it!
sujuteukie
#3
Chapter 1: Wow Dei....This was heartbreaking!
Well I've got to prepare myself for more~.
Btw,your writing skills are excellent.
airedowen #4
Chapter 1: I just wanted to say thanks for writing like this. Oftentimes I really get so disappointed at how people don't pay attention to detail. I like reading something with such detail, and attention to the visuals. Very well written indeed. Easily a favorite.

What also struck me was that the dates and the location made it seem like a diary. Not so much a diary of one person, but rather it goes with the military ambiance. I can see each scenario in a film, the date and location being typed at the corner of the screen as the scene takes place.

So worth the time to read. Hope you receive more readers and subscribers. Looking forward to more! :>
Song_SeoHyun #5
fantastic writing skills. love your descriptions. and yes a very nice forward
ontokki92
#6
Chapter 1: update soon.. I'm really impressed with your writing skills ^^
Oh god celebrities in Military!! can't wait to read more..
-ontae
fighting!! :D
suyi01 #7
Chapter 1: This is really a good story~ Looking forward to the updates :)
Chabelita
#8
LIKE I SAID,INSTANT SUBSCRIBE

I like how the story just kicks off with how nervous everyone is!!! Man I cannot gather my thoughts correctly, but this is just how I imagined it! By it I mean the whole celebrities going to battle thing. I LOVE IT, 10/10, WOULD TAKE OUT TO DINNER

and no i was not paid to do this <3 <4
twinbiased
#9
Chapter 1: OMG HOLY ADGAVSDXBV SUBSCRIBING ~