Everything changes when you become an Appa

Description

It is Children's Day, 2019, and Jiyong is spending the day in a special way- taking his daughter to go and visit her other father: Choi Seunghyun.

 

 

Foreword

I wrote this story specifically for -mach2's "It's the Holiday Season: A Writing Contest". I've never entered a writing contest before so... we'll see how this goes, lol. 

This is also the first GTOP/GRI fic I've writen and only the second that isn't a comedy. So again, we shall see how it goes. Hope you enjoy it!

 

 

EDIT- I got second place! 0.o I am still in shock about that! I think I'm going to try more writing contests now. It gave me a reason to stretch  my writing wings and write something slightly out of my comfort zone and... I think the result is alright ^_^

 
Author's Thoughts
todaevip87
Whew... finally finished! That... that was harder than I thought it would be.
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Mlk77GTOP #1
Chapter 6: Damn! how sad I could not stop crying ... I do not want my boys to ever die! I broke my heart even to think ... but I really liked this story.
Danees #2
Chapter 6: You got me here. Thank you for make it happen.
Pame10 #3
Chapter 6: I have to.say that you have a way with words because this was just so.sad and im like really crying it got me hard on the feeling
nobodynoone #4
Chapter 6: i never like it if there's a story where one of members died :'( it's too sad authornim but it's too good to not read it too..
didoe84 #5
Chapter 6: Omg that's so so sad!!!!! I cried a lot..... but I swear it would be my only ever loved GRi story ... (Since its a GTOP too) . Thanks for writing and sharing
143mimoky #6
Chapter 6: Aw.. well it's hard to move on. It takes time..
AndreaPark #7
Chapter 6: It's a beautiful story,,
i cried hard T.T
thank you for this story ^^
jongkeyminkey #8
Chapter 6: . I cried.
Nalu801 #9
Chapter 6: It' s really a fantastic fiction... I cried a lot while I was reading it. You was able to convey all their emotions, their twisting, sad and love feelings...I realized that Top was dead, when they were walking towards the graveyard... and I felt a pang in my heart! Thank you for this story!!!
bigtedy1 #10
Chapter 6: just.... TT_TT....omg...i cried...so beautiful...so...sorry, but i am simply lost for words. great work.
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