Fell for a Mannequin

Description

Eunhyuk follows Donghae to the forgotten garden behind the school in search of some UFO, but is then when Eunhyuk finds a mannequin; a beautiful perfect one.

                 

Foreword

I started to write this story after Eunhyukjae wrote her story Mannequin, so I commented there and we talked about how I thought about fantasy and she told me she doesn't write fantasy fics and then, the conversation somehow turned into me, writing a short chaptered fantasy version about her story, so is different and I'm writing the fluff, but it's not really a fluff story.

Even so, this story if for Eunhyukjae, and like you may know, is a great girl and a good writer, so yeah... I'm nervous, but still I hope she like this.

Dear friend, enjoy this.

And Dear readers, I would love if you also read this, if not, I have another specials stories for you ^^ 

 

Author's Thoughts
Tsuki-Ah
Finally I finish writing Fell for a Mannequin >.< Enjoy it~
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BunnyTina #1
Chapter 4: Wooooooooooahhhhhhhhh Such a Great Story!!! I completely love it... Is the best fantasy fanfic that I ever read!!!! Is so beautiful ~ !
eunhyukjae #2
scold me but it would be funny if eunhyuk suddenly asked "so, how old are you now Kyuhyun?" XD well since maybe kyuhyun is the prince in the fairytale eunhyuk read, hehe...
but i'm really curious about the age, bcos eunhyuk&donghae were like elementary students, so cute >.< and i think kyuhyun aged hundreds years old already XD (sorry for blabbering, it's just bcos i'm happy you finally finished it! :D)

this is nice, beyond my expectation actually, hehe... *clap clap*
but have to say that the final chapter seems a bit rushed to the ending. because siwon confess, break up, confess to the mannequin, the mannequin become alive...it all happened in one chapter, a bit fast compared to the previous chapters which went slowly. just my opinion, hope you don't mind :)
not too short or long, just nice ^^
oh and i like that you describe the mannequin's expression (or emotion?) like the glint on its eyes and else, i can imagine it like in a movie :D

thank you for writing this!
and uh...i think it's surpassed my version of 'mannequin'...? hehe
good job!
purpleungu #3
Chapter 4: Aawwwww....so sweet...this is just right...not too short and not long of a story. I love it...
de_m00n #4
Chapter 4: aaaa..... Its beautiful... I like it..
mrslee19 #5
Chapter 4: Well, hey, that's one good story Unnie :DD Donghae is cuteness as its finest. He's so cute I'd like to bite him. :3
Hyukjae's personality got me. Thumbs up Unnie.
michikokasiumi #6
Chapter 4: HWOOOOOOAHH!!! Ginaaa!!!! omooo... i read it in one goo!!! O.M.G!! ur improving sooooooooooooooooo much!!! >0<
omooo... u r great ginaa!!! the plot.. the story,, omooo.. n its kyuhyuk.. wow... i love the way u describe it... whaaa... cool >o<
meehyukkie #7
Chapter 4: Thank you for the beautiful story Tsuki-ah ^^
i love it, it's really sweet xD
Donghae and his obsession with aliens is so cute, i love that fishy hehehe
And then you add Siwon there, it's just perfect xD
And what i love the most is Hyukkie, he's soo adorable the way he treats everyone around him..
You doing a great job,, again xD
Thank you *bearhugs*
Ami_SuJuElf #8
Chapter 4: omg!! omg!! omg!!!

What is this?? am I'm reading Fairy Tale with Kyuhyuk's version?? Coz I swear, Pinochio, Alice, Beauty & The Beast, Sleeping Beauty story were playing in my head as I read this...

I must say that 'Choice' (if I'm not mistaken the title) was your best story ever, WAS!! because now I felt that this Doll...

Kyuhyuk: Mannequin!!

okay, Mannequin is your best story ever!! You're really improving!!

and please.. can u just give the mannequin to me? because I'm dying to have one if it was Kyuhyun... (joking... xp)
eunhyukjae #9
wow...finally! anticipating this ^^
kkk...thank you so much for this :D *hugs*
mrslee19 #10
Yoh,unnie. You've been wallowing in magic fics lately huh. I'll certainly read this. Anyway, there's a little mistake in the description. I'm writing the fluff- -but it's not really a fluff. OHMAGASH. LOVE YA
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