Another Heart

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Kim Suho really believes that he still has another chance to live this life.

 

He and his brother, Kim Siwon, 

still continue their life as perfectly as they can

after they lost both of their parents.

 

 

Suho suffers a heart disease.

He knows that his heart can stop anytime and anywhere, 

so he appreciates everything he has.

 

 

Another heart for Suho; is that possible?

 

 

 

 

This is my first time join a contest :)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/306193/shake-it-up-super-junior-writing-contest-contest

 

EDITED: The story is third person POV.

ATTENTION :  I want to credit to intimewithyou and KimAeri for proofread my fanfic :D Thank you so much :D I already edited this fanfic and for me, the grammar is good now, but the feeling is slightly change. Maybe a lil bit diff with the old one. Anyway, I able to edit it anyway. Enjoy :D

 

List of people that review my story: (I want to know what other think about Another Heart :) i dont care if it's critic or praise. But in the end, I hope you enjoy. You can see their review in these links )

 

-dearsoul (link)

 placingfifth

- Thanks for Summer Breeze Shop for promoting my fanfic... (link)

- Beautiful Darkness Review Shop

-Oblivion Review Shop

-Second Poster by Lu-hen.

- On Glory's Edge

**some of them might revamp their shop. Not all of the reviewer(s) were mentioned since  I might lose in tracking them :(

 

Foreword

 

 

Starring:

 

EXO members

Suho

Kyungsoo

Baekhyun

Chanyeol

Sehun

Luhan ( only mentioned)

 

Super Junior

Siwon

Ryewook

Leeteuk

Kyuhyun

Donghae

 

 

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seoulsunshine #1
Chapter 2: This is so beautiful. Such a beautiful ending for everyone <3
seoulsunshine #2
Chapter 1: Donghae hyung so kind :’)
Milayka #3
Chapter 3: Congrats! I dunno how you will make the sequel w Suho dead though :3 ahhh u'll figure something out xD lol
Milayka #4
Chapter 2: ......
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T^T he died a hero.
Bless his soul <3

This was lovely...sad....but lovely.
Milayka #5
Chapter 1: I never thought I could ever hate my Angel but he is such an a$$ here I just can't!!! D:
seoulsunshine #6
Chapter 2: I cry again after 2 years
seoulsunshine #7
Chapter 2: I come here and read it agaun and yeap... why you kill him~~~

But I cant remember the ending??? Did you change it??
schandelierre #8
Chapter 2: Ahhhh.... I hate you for making me spill the tears....
trashbagget #9
Chapter 2: so touching even though suho babay died in here
joondaes #10
Chapter 4: Geez. My bias is Suho and I can't help but sob. I mean, if that happened in real life, I could have grabbed some sharp-edged knife and killed myself too, LOL. Kidding aside, I might be too late but congrats on winning the contest. I loved the story a lot. OMG. I spazz a lot whenever I see Suho with Suho plus Kyuhyun. QWERTYUIOP! God, I'm glad I've found something like this. I seldom see great Suho fics. Well done! :)
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