WOW... So... Surprising!!!!

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When you go to Korea, and the first person you meet is none other than Kim HeeChul? Or that you found out that you live right next to SuJu's dorm??? As you are Korean, but moved to Texas for studying, you are familiar to Seoul, but what if you find out that your best friend was in SuJu? What would you do? Or if you found out that your school crush for years is The Evil Maknae??? 

What would you do? 

Foreword

Okie, this is my first time writing a fanfic, so please bear with me!!!!!!!! Please, please please subscribe, or else I'll lose my inspiration because it gives me inspiration and the will to write!! So, you'd better subscribe if you're reading this please, Lol, I sound desperate!! XD 

Anyways, Leave comments either critisizing me, but not really hurtful, just about the story, or complimenting me!! ^_~ Thanks!!!

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Pumpkin_Minnie
my chappies are gonna be short until I get hold of my laptot or get hold of a computer!
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LadyMichaelis_ #1
Chapter 11: hey dear! Sorry for late comment. Truly sorry.
Well, the idea is not bad. But the way you write it.
(I'm giving my opinion as a reader, kay? Sorry if I hurt you but actually I want to help you. =)
Write like a professional writer, like don't use a lot of ! and ?. Because it looks unprofessional.
Use the normal style of writing. Don't change it.
Do not use "ughh!", "gahh!" and something like that because readers will be bored if they read it a lot.
and actually there's a lot of fans love couple like eunhae, kyumin or other couples but since you're still a kid and innocent, just ignore it~ And make the story funny; comedy, yeah. In other word, make the readers laugh. And it will make them want to read more.
Dear, I hope I didn't hurt you. Or, did I? huwaaaa ~!! unnie say sorry T_T
And : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/172914/how-to-be-an-aff-writing-god-workshop-writing-advicecolumn-exchocotaey
^ open it and I hope it is helpful for you. And my opinion too, sorry if I hurt you. I didn't mean to T__T
AngelaMiina #2
Urgh..mianhei..Umma mean *Jangmi..Maybe umma love min so much and wrote Jangmin there... XD
AngelaMiina #3
Chapter 10: Hehe...baby, I actually didn't read fluffy or this kind of fic..(if you know me I love angst and dark fic) but now that I'd read it, it's interesting! Poor jangmin keep arguing with Heechul! hehe..diva indeed..And it's sad that Wookie kind of forgot his bestfriend, but still, he has been idol and has lots of things as responsibilities, so, can't blame him..And Jangmi..I hope she is okay...
And...Miina umma there TT TT Huuuu...*proud umma here* eventhough it has nothing to do with me, i thank you for that XD
Dear, your writing is interesting! I love to read sentences that you had strike through.. It's hilarious! XD And it amazes me how you can write this good when you are just 11..Hm, my daughter indeed, but when umma is 11 umma only write stories in my language.. XD You can improve more and one day be a great writer! ^^
LadyMichaelis_ #4
Chapter 10: That picture.. scary.. -_-
LadyMichaelis_ #5
Chapter 9: *curl my toes when reading this chapter*
LadyMichaelis_ #6
Chapter 8: Well, actually is this story about love or friendship?
MLPERK01 #7
Chapter 8: I just read the latest chapter and loved it! Btw, happy thanksgiving!
MLPERK01 #8
Chapter 7: I love it! Please update soon!
LadyMichaelis_ #9
Chapter 7: LOL. BigbanD? Haha
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