Umm.... You Miss Me?

WOW... So... Surprising!!!!

Ryeowook's POV:

Aah! This store probably has HeeChul hyung in there! Its called 'The Ultimate Jjang Clothing Store' so hyung would probably check it out if its name is true.... ~__~

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Kyu's POV:

I wish I was back home playing Starcraft.. ;~;  But Minnie is here, so its okie, I guess... ^.^;;

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SungMin's POV:

HeeChul hyung, where could he be? Geez..... Hehehe, Imma with Kyu now, finally alone with him (almost) !! ^('-'^);; (^'-')^;;

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JangMi's POV:

Psh, that was a weird situation... -__-;; I'm gonna get out of this store before I see anymore weird commotions, it's barely my first day after I came back! 

Holy Shiz! Is that.... 

"WOOKIE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" I screamed/asked

"OHMAIGAHD, JANGMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He replied hugging me.

"Wookie.. c-can't b-breathe....."

"Ohh, mianhaeyo!! ^-^ Just so excited to see you back here!! Gosh, you have grown so tall and pretty!!" He babbled.

"God, you sound like an ahjumma! Shut up and introduce your new friends you have gotten here!" I said, finally noticing his friends.

"Oh, this is SungMin and KyuHyun!" He said as he pushed them foreward.

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SungMin's POV:

"Oh, this is SungMin and KyuHyun!" Wook exclaimed. He pushed me foreward and gosh, that girl (JangMI was it?) is so beautiful!

I stood there blushing like a tomato. She gave me this look as if she was saying, " Who the heck are you, and why are you blushing?" Kekeke..... ^^

"A-a-annyeong, I am SungMin-imnida......"

"........"

Is she angry at me, or what? She just nodded! How rude!

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JangMi's POV:

That boy-SungMin- just turned as red as a tomato!!! LOL!!!

"A-a-annyeong, I am SungMin-imnida......"

"........." I was confused! Wookie has another friend? Woah, does he even actually miss me? I was busy thinking so I just nodded. I looked up and that boy had a disapproving look on his face. Pah!

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KyuHyun's POV:

After SungMin introduced himself, Ryeowook pushed me too! DANG, Wookie has a pretty HOT best friend if you ask me! Well, first impression is always the best!

"Annyeong-haseyo, I am Cho KyuHyun-imnida!" I said with a smirk.

"Umm.. A-a-annyeong..."

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JangMi's POV:
"Anyeong-haseyo, I am Cho KyuHyun-imnida!" That other guy said with a smirk. Umm, rude much?

WAIT, HOLD UP!!!! Cho freaking KyuHyun?!?!? The Cho KyuHYun? My crush!?!?!?!?! Shiz! What am i gonna do?!?!?!

"Umm.. A-a-annyeong..." I stammered.

Does RyeoWook still know that I have a cruch on him STILL??

Why did RyeoWook befriend him?!?! ;~;

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RyeoWook's POV:

I saw little angMi's face after Kyu introduced himself. WAIT... Does she stil like him?!?!? Seeing the awkwardness between them, I was the good guy and said," Umm... You miss me?"

"Of course, Wook oppa!!" She beamed. Yep, still the cute little girl from back then! I wonder if she knows us.. SUPER JUNIOR......

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HeeChul's POV:

Phew, so close to a sudden fan attack! Is that Wook, Kyu, and Min I see there? Oh! And they are talking to that girl that gave me a weird look from before!

I ran up to them and said," Addyo, Wassup gaiz? Who's this hot chick?"

The girl looked down, blushing. Hehehe, I probably embarrassed her^^

"Oppa, who is he? HOw did you make so many friends?" The girl asked frowning.

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN WHO IS HE?!?! I'm Kim HeeChul for Shisus' sake!" I screamed angrily

"And how am I supposed to KNOW you?"

Geez girl, get a life! I am from SUPER JUNIOR!!!!!"

"Who is Super Junior?" The girl inquired.

gosh, where was she when we debuted and all that good stuff? I looked at Wookie in surprise.

"UMM..... JangMi, Super Junior is our band." Wookie finally answered. So her name is JangMi, eh?

"Only the four of you?" I mentally slapped myself.

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LadyMichaelis_
#1
Chapter 11: hey dear! Sorry for late comment. Truly sorry.
Well, the idea is not bad. But the way you write it.
(I'm giving my opinion as a reader, kay? Sorry if I hurt you but actually I want to help you. =)
Write like a professional writer, like don't use a lot of ! and ?. Because it looks unprofessional.
Use the normal style of writing. Don't change it.
Do not use "ughh!", "gahh!" and something like that because readers will be bored if they read it a lot.
and actually there's a lot of fans love couple like eunhae, kyumin or other couples but since you're still a kid and innocent, just ignore it~ And make the story funny; comedy, yeah. In other word, make the readers laugh. And it will make them want to read more.
Dear, I hope I didn't hurt you. Or, did I? huwaaaa ~!! unnie say sorry T_T
And : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/172914/how-to-be-an-aff-writing-god-workshop-writing-advicecolumn-exchocotaey
^ open it and I hope it is helpful for you. And my opinion too, sorry if I hurt you. I didn't mean to T__T
AngelaMiina
#2
Urgh..mianhei..Umma mean *Jangmi..Maybe umma love min so much and wrote Jangmin there... XD
AngelaMiina
#3
Chapter 10: Hehe...baby, I actually didn't read fluffy or this kind of fic..(if you know me I love angst and dark fic) but now that I'd read it, it's interesting! Poor jangmin keep arguing with Heechul! hehe..diva indeed..And it's sad that Wookie kind of forgot his bestfriend, but still, he has been idol and has lots of things as responsibilities, so, can't blame him..And Jangmi..I hope she is okay...
And...Miina umma there TT TT Huuuu...*proud umma here* eventhough it has nothing to do with me, i thank you for that XD
Dear, your writing is interesting! I love to read sentences that you had strike through.. It's hilarious! XD And it amazes me how you can write this good when you are just 11..Hm, my daughter indeed, but when umma is 11 umma only write stories in my language.. XD You can improve more and one day be a great writer! ^^
LadyMichaelis_
#4
Chapter 10: That picture.. scary.. -_-
LadyMichaelis_
#5
Chapter 9: *curl my toes when reading this chapter*
LadyMichaelis_
#6
Chapter 8: Well, actually is this story about love or friendship?
MLPERK01 #7
Chapter 8: I just read the latest chapter and loved it! Btw, happy thanksgiving!
MLPERK01 #8
Chapter 7: I love it! Please update soon!
LadyMichaelis_
#9
Chapter 7: LOL. BigbanD? Haha