Beautiful Obsession

Description

Luhan's eyes are always on her. He never lets her out of his sight and he watches from afar, admiring all that he sees and more. His eyes always follows her as she is doing whatever it is that she does. Though he finds comfort in knowing that there is no one in her heart, it always brings him despair to know that he isn't in her heart.

But he's determined to change that and will do anything to have her.

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(Previously known as RogueVisions, in case people are confused by the poster and conflicting username.)

Foreword

She's my beautiful obsession, my burning passion.

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"Over my dead body," She yelled in outrage. His response was that of a small smile-no, it was more of a smirk. A sadistic yet beautiful smirk.

"Just remember. Your words, not mine."

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My Inspiration

My inspiration for this story was actually "Going Crazy" by Ji Eun ft. Bang YongGuk. But I decided to be different and not have BYG as the main character but rather someone you really wouldn't expect. This is one of my favourite songs EVER and after listening to it over and over again, I decided to put the song into a story, though with my own twist to it. Hope you enjoy and please leave beautiful comments for me to read!

-Rynn

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Thank you Fascinating V E R A C I T Y for reviewing my story! 84/100

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Started on: November 10, 2012.

Finished on: January 2, 2013.

Genre: Suspense

Word Count: 6972

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mrsjgb #1
Chapter 5: wow!! this is your first fanfic! and its already amazing! its creepy,but at the same time beautiful,hauntingly beautiful. i love how clear u described every detail in the story. because sometimes,i have trouble in imagination,but this one,i hardly find any difficulties imagining every situation. its crystal clear..and creepy luhan is really interesting! those baby face with not so baby face mind~ and the epilogue is just perfect for a closure!
keep writing lots of stories! i'll check out our other stories too! thanks for the amazing story!
Neonlights92 #2
Chapter 5: I want more! Too bad is such a short story! It was really good!
acidgaf #3
Chapter 2: LUHANNN YAAH WHAT R U THINKING RUINING OTHERS GRAVES LMFAOOO HE IS LOVE SICK XDDDDDDD
jooyeon15 #4
Chapter 5: awww ~~~ just like that .....but the plot is very interesting ....if you continued .... i like it so much... i just hope luhan not pyscho here...and have a great ending bye byeee
kmulrocks #5
Chapter 4: this is freakily scary but awsome. good work authornim! ^^
sorrowfulRain #6
Chapter 2: Creepy lulu...
Krio45 #7
Chapter 5: Luhan was creeping me out but the last chapter makes me so sad that i almost cry...though he killed minhee himself he still love her to the death he is in this state....nice ff authornim
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