Never Give Up

Description

“Hello.” A clear voice, deep and almost nasal sounding, rung through the room. The boy-bot sat back, pulling itself out of the man’s grasp to look at him with wide, cool eyes that looked all-knowing but so uncomprehending of reality. His single word made that pang in the man’s heart grow. It wasn’t the sound of a friend’s greeting, or the salutation of a long missed family member. That simple hello was cold and rehearsed. The man couldn’t have expected more from a machine but his heart still beckoned for that sense of something else. He forced that something else out from his mind though, the little addition of his imagination, and it filled his heart just enough to stifle the emotions that made him sick.

“Hey there.” The man spoke softly to the newly woken boy despite tenderness being unnecessary. The boy just smiled, something he’d been programmed to do. It made the man sigh discontentedly which caught the robot’s attention.

“Sir, what’s wrong?” Worry was etched on his face, his fake face. It was made of synthetic material that felt and looked like skin but was made of some ugly sounding rubber substance. It stretched smoothly across the manufactured cheekbones and jawline of this robot boy, hiding the harsh looking technology underneath. The eyes were the part that was strangest to the man. They could be filled so wholly with human emotion but each time the man looked into them he could see the ever so slight movement of the lens inside, focusing and refocusing on his movements.

“I told you not to call me that Junhong.” The boy-bot pouted and the man’s head swayed. It was something his little sister had done when she wanted something. This robot was slowly breaking his heart.

Foreword

As you can see this is a ZeloxRobot fic.

I've been working on this slowly but it's a personal favourite of mine ^-^ I hope you all stick to the end, I promise it will be good :D

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So I'm writing the next update :3

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PromisesNoelle
#1
Chapter 13: Omo I so wish you still updated this story! I just read what you have and it's very good and I would love to know more about Zelo's adventures etc. Also I think it would be interesting to know the reaction of the tenant when she found out Junhong was gone.
avylol08
#2
Chapter 12: Whoop! Zelos gonna be a 'real' Boy!!!! XD
Fragezeichen #3
Chapter 9: I'm sorry it took me so long to review again. It's still really good. Just the way you write is difficult to forget. I'm sure this sounds strange, but every time I read a chapter it leaves me with a mood...? I like the feeling your story gives. For me this means, it's a good story. I only feel something if the story is unique and well written...
wynneth
#4
Chapter 13: When's the next update??
Fragezeichen #5
Chapter 7: You're story gets better and better :D
I really want to say "Thank you" for writing it :)
The way Junhong gets more human every day is good described and believable... okay, I know robots aren't real ^^ but I'm pretty sure they would learn and act like Junhong ^^ XD
Fragezeichen #6
Chapter 2: I liked Minhyeon because he seemed... so human.
So unperfect but still kind-hearted. You described him really well.
Fragezeichen #7
I really like the way you write. You take your time, so the story doesn't go on too fast. It seems realistic like that :) There aren't really much ff like this, so I'm glad I found yours :) :)
vortex234
#8
Chapter 13: IT'S UPDATED IT'S UPDATED YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) I'm so happy! This is my favorite story out of all the ones I've read. :) I'm so happy you're continuing with this. :)
I'm so happy Junhonggie is back! And (hopefully) becoming a trainee. :) I wonder if we'll meet the elusive talkative ninja soon? :D
As always, keep up the wonderful work, author-nim!
whitestallion
#9
Chapter 13: haha. you took too long to update, though you know that already. but i really like this story, so i'm glad you updated again. since you're joining a writing contest (or did i see wrongly idk), you'll update more frequently perhaps? Haha. (:

i think Jongup and Zelo are really cute together. Dae isn't in the picture yet right, or have i forgotten something?