Mute

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            Shin Ha Jin lost her voice doing what she liked the most: singing. Lee Byunghun is a new student in Jang Sil Academy, the same school Ha Jin goes to. Although difficult at first, an innocent and sincere relationship is born.

Foreword

The whole plot has changed, I'm now writing from Byunghun's point of view.

Hope you'll still like it and thank you so much!

 

Previous poster by angela_ @ tokkiberry.com.

Review by iloveyoubaek @ Paradise Review Shop, thank you!

Current poster by boxes- @ the WHITE box.

 

 

 

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Mute is one year old today! Here's a chapter to celebrate it! Thank you to all of you who were waiting! :D

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MayAndJune
#1
Chapter 7: Omg I can't believe you updated a day after I mentioned this to you! :'D

Why didn't Byunghun go for Hajin's door immediately? Why did he have to wait until Myungsoo came and, in the end, didn't go for it at all?

And Hajin's look of disappointment.... is Byunghun the one she expects? Haha, they've gotten closer after all.

And why did Myungsoo suddenly approach Byunghun? I have a feeling that his intention is more than just 'being nice to a potential friend'. Did something happen between those two at Hajin's house? Hahahah

Anyways....... Mute is going to end soon? Waeeeeeee D: I
MayAndJune
#2
Chapter 6: 'a wild tao appears'

Pfft hahahahahaha you have no idea what happened when I read the random Tao madness (if you're wondering, I have a hint for you: when I read that, I was drinking water....)

Hajin didn't come to school? It must've been hard for her to digest all that information in one day. Byunghun cheered her up by making fun of himself, but that of course isn't enough.

I don't understand her feelings because I never got to experience that, but I might do almost the exact same thing if I were on her shoes. To know that there's no hope of you getting your voice back, especially if you love singing is very harsh. But it's not wrong to be hoping that there's still hope right? :D

And I love Byunghun and his dad's relationship. They're like, very close, but Mr. Lee still have the father side of him. He worried and scolded Byunghun, but not that harsh kind of scolding.
And Mr. Lee didn't go all 'oh how did it go son did you kiss her yet' and tease Byunghun either, like in those typical romcom fics. Honestly, I hate that kind of fictional parents most. Like, come on.....

In midst of the negativity of the news, at least there's a little good in it (I tend to view things in a positive way haha). Byunghun and Hajin's friendship have gotten deeper, thanks to that night. Right now, I don't wish for them to end up together quickly, I still want some of the cute friendship of theirs progressing into something more slowly, hahahahah

Anyways, thanks for the update! I really enjoyed it:3
Thekpopobsessor
#3
Chapter 6: Tao XD kekeke so cute~
derpychannie
#4
Chapter 3: loving this story alreadyyyy <33

tbh it kinda makes me sad that such a sweet girl like ha jin is actually mute ;_;
byunghun is cute, in this story, and i like that :3

well even though this relationship between byunghun and ha jin is still a new lovely friendship, i hope in the end it grows into something more lololol cause that's what i am expecting x)
dolittle123
#5
Chapter 6: Ha Jin is such a sweet girl. :33
MayAndJune
#6
Chapter 5: OMG you updated! It's been a while and sometimes I wonder where's the newest update. lol Byunghun must be in some kind of dilemma since Hajin likes Myungsoo and he likes her too.

Uncurable? Officially disabled? Poor Hajin. Not only she lost her father in the accident, she also lost her voice. It must be hard for her since even Byunghyun (and I) was surprised by the letter. Hajin is officially mute and her chance of speaking again is less than usual.

Byunghun is nice enough to take Hajin home, and he even got to sleep under one roof (not one room, though....) with her. Score one for Byunghun lol! (since I doubt Myungsoo ever slept over Hajin's house...)

And since your friend mentioned it, I realized that Byunghun is...... a teeny weeny bit of..... gay. But I love is personality, which means..... I like gay guys? WHAT. Hahahahah, just kidding, by the way. Byunghun has traits that most men don't have, and it's great. Girls might swoon over him if he used it without sounding gay. LOLOL sorry Byunghun. Besides he is very sensitive because of something right? Plus he likes Hajin which makes him pretty much straight lol

Poor the girl whose father was shot in front of her eyes! Plus she is about my age now, I feel sad for her. It must be hard when one second you're talking to your dad and the next second he laid dead before your eyes. Bet the crazy citizen is jailed...... for life I hope. Besides, I thought it wasn't legal to own a gun? (from where I come from though)
Marianations #7
Chapter 4: Obrigada pelo capítulo ! Nós as duas aqui a falarmos de coisas quando eu devia estar a comentar a tua história HUL !
Esse rapazolas apaixonado... rapaz, rapaz... temos que sofrer ás vezes, sabias ? As coisas não podem ser sempre como nós queremos, darling.

Ó meu Deus pareço louca a comentar em português misturado com inglês XD

Obrigadaaaaaaaa !!!
Marianations #8
Ó caraças. Eu sei que devia ter comentado antes mas bem T.T
Estes dois tão a ficar mais e mais próximos cada dia ! São totalmente adoráveis, que posso dizer ? Mesmo assim, é uma pena que ela seja muda. Deveria ter outra oportunidade, pobre desgraçada !
E a mãe dele... T.T

Pobre mulher, ainda a sofrer...


Obrigada !
MayAndJune
#9
I am smiling throughout the last 2 chapters of this fanfic (since the first one is kind of an introduction(?) to the story). I actually found out this story when a reader promoted this fanfic on her blog post. So not regretting on clicking the link to this fic lol

I love the relation of Hajin and Byunghun, though it's just been 3 chapters and the closest they got is at the park when Hajin confronted Byunghun. Hajin seems to be a very beautiful girl, inside and out & Byunghun seems to be drawn by her. You did a great job in writing this fanfic, and I'm sure you'll do as great (or even better?) for the upcoming chapters.

You made me fell in love with this fanfic hahaha great job on that, especially I'm not a Teen Top fan. At all. :x and I voted too haha, I knew I just had to give my vote as soon as I finished readin the 3 chapters
caramelfrappucino
#10
Chapter 3: This story is soooo good! :D
Update soon please author nim~