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Mute

 

 


    I inserted some coins on the school's vending machine and pushed the button for a bottle of banana milk; it didn't come out. I pushed it again, once, twice... nothing came out. I pressed it continuosly, already annoyed for having wasted money.
    
    "You have to kick it."
    I looked around to see who was talking to me — if it was to me, of course — and sure enough, the corridor was deserted except for me and him. I cocked my head to the right and slightly smiled, confused. "Huh?"
    My emotionless L/Myungsoo (is it even right? that's what the others called him, right?) classmate walked past me and kicked hard the vending machine. "It only works like this."
    My banana milk came down in an instant and I picked it. "Thanks!"
    
    He shrugged as he used the machine as well. I stayed there with him because... I didn't have a place to go and spend recess on. He glanced at me.
    
    "You're the foreign one, right?" One kick.
    I inserted the straw on the package. "Hm." I nodded as I drank the milk.
    "If you need any help getting around, don't hesitate in asking me." More coins, another kick. "I know I look cold, but it depends from person to person..." He chuckled as he squatted to get his drinks. "You don't seem the social type either..."
    "I get that a lot." I nodded, even though he wasn't looking at me.
    "Well," he turned to me, two bottle of banana milk on his hands. "See you around, then."
    
    And in a few strides, he was already out of the building, leaving me alone inside of the silent building. It was such a good, sunny day outside that I decided to do the same, and take that as a chance to get around the school campus, still new to me.


    "Myungsoo, you have someone for you."
    
    I looked up from my seat to see Myungsoo and his long steps making its way to the door next to me. I followed him with my eyes and saw two girls by the door. I was surprised to see one that was extremly familiar to me, especially her silence. I frowned, looking away from them. Oh! The one at the hospital! I glanced back at them and saw her holding tight, in front of her chest, onto what it seemed a sketch notebook. not even once moved, I raised my eyebrow, she was indeed weird. I looked at the other girl, taller and too talkative, as if to balance the duo. Not funny, Byunghun.
    
    "Oh, isn't that the new guy?" The girl said, louder. "Ha Jin, look at him!" As soon as I felt their eyes on me, I looked away. So embarassing. I tried to look at my reflection on my phone's screen and ran my hand through my head. Must at least look good, right? "Hey, new guy!"

    I turned back at them, to see the taller and talkative (the only one talking, actually) wave at me. Should I get up? Oh, come on, Byunghun, you're not in middle school anymore. I got up and walked to them, staying by Myungsoo's side.
    
    "Hi."
    "He's Byunghun," Myungsoo said.
    "Yeah, I'm Byunghun."
    "Hye Ri, Moon Hye Ri!" The girl handed out her hand and I shook it. "Nice to meet you!"
    "Uh, yes, nice to meet you too." The other girl elbowed Hye Ri in a not very discreet way.
    "Ouch." Hye Ri glanced at her, frowning. She sighed. "Ha Jin says 'hi'. Shin Ha Jin." Hye Ri made a hand movement as if telling Ha Jin to bring out her hand for me to shook it; She did so, never stopping holding tight onto her notebook.
    
    Weird.
    
    "Nice to meet you," I mumbled to Ha Jin.
    "Don't mind her." Hye Ri waved in front of her, and took a step closer to me.
    "Don't say that." Myungsoo's eyes never left Ha Jin. "Did you have lunch already?" The girl nodded. "Was it any good?" The girl shrugged, and moved the notebook to her hands, took a pen that was held onto the notebook's rings and was about to uncap it when Myungsoo stopped her. "Don't, it's not necessa..."
    I couldn't hear it anymore, since I had a girl talking in very high decibels right next to my ears. I flinched and cleared my throat, to speak in my very quiet tone. "E-Excuse me?" I turned to her.
    "I asked how was life in America." She smiled at me.
    "It was good, normal..." I took a step back. "I haven't lived here for a long time, only a week, so I can't really compare..."
    "Oh, I see." She kept on smiling, a faint blush growing on her cheeks.
    
      So... annoying.
    Not really the feeling in itself (embarassment, shyness? those are my best friends there), but the girl and her non-stopping chit-chat. Where did she get so many themes to talk about with a guy she had just met? She must tell me! If only it weren't so bothersome... Thankfully, Myungsoo interrupted us to tell Hye Ri that Ha Jin wanted to go. Weird chicks. I turned over to Myungsoo who was bidding them goodbye and 'see you later''s. Hye Ri frantically waved at me, while I only nodded. Fangirling at this time of the day?
    I could have sworn she had said to Ha Jin, while walking away from us, that I 'was totally cute, and had completely fallen head over heels for her'. Uhh guys? ...





    "Visit hours during the week only start at 5PM, I'm afraid you'll have to wait before seeing patient Lee Min Hee."
    "Can't I just go in? I'm her son."
    "I'm sorry, sir, Hospital's policy is to be respected."


    I sighed as I laid my head back, holding tight on the swing's straps, carelessly throwing my legs back and forward, trying to move around. I puffed up my cheeks as I let my gaze get lost on the blue sky.
    I still had a hour before going back to the hospital. Honestly, I could have gone home, but what would I do, once I got there? I would be all alone—my Father is still at work—, in a closed space... Might as well as spend that time on the Central Park right in front of the Hospital; which was what I did.
    I finally looked around, not before blinking a few times in order to get used to the not-so-bright-as-the-sky environment. The park was rather empty, there were only a few people walking (or even running), most of them being couples, kids running around, an empty swing next to mine...
    
    No.
    Scratch that.

    The previous empty swing next to me was now in the possession (?! is that even right?) of a girl. In my school's uniform. Funny. The same girl of the hospital, the one that is friends with the Moon Hye Ri girl that I got to (unpleasantly? Should stop being so mean...) know today.
    Shin Ha Jin was staring at me, holding out her notebook right in front of her, arms spreaded holding into its edges. The white sheet had something written with a large, black marker:

    "Hi!"
    
    The girl smiled at me, a look of relief started to spread on her face. For how long had she been there, with her arms outstretched like that, holding into that not-really-light-looking notebook? Waiting for me to notice her? Why didn't she call for me as soon as she sat there?
    Ha Jin eyed me, and then tilted her head to her side.
    
    "Hi," I said finally, with a very weak voice, my turn to blush, way to go, Byunghun. I cleared my throat. "Since lunch."
    
    Shin Ha Jin wouldn't stop smiling. She nodded as she put her notebook on her lap, uncapped her marker and wrote on that very same page, her eye-smile never leaving her.
    
    Only then it hit me.
    The girl, Shin Ha Jin, was mute.

 


A/N: Thank you so much for all your kind comments!

Also, edited chapter 1 since it had a few typos :)

Hope you like it, see you around~!

 

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Mute is one year old today! Here's a chapter to celebrate it! Thank you to all of you who were waiting! :D

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MayAndJune
#1
Chapter 7: Omg I can't believe you updated a day after I mentioned this to you! :'D

Why didn't Byunghun go for Hajin's door immediately? Why did he have to wait until Myungsoo came and, in the end, didn't go for it at all?

And Hajin's look of disappointment.... is Byunghun the one she expects? Haha, they've gotten closer after all.

And why did Myungsoo suddenly approach Byunghun? I have a feeling that his intention is more than just 'being nice to a potential friend'. Did something happen between those two at Hajin's house? Hahahah

Anyways....... Mute is going to end soon? Waeeeeeee D: I
MayAndJune
#2
Chapter 6: 'a wild tao appears'

Pfft hahahahahaha you have no idea what happened when I read the random Tao madness (if you're wondering, I have a hint for you: when I read that, I was drinking water....)

Hajin didn't come to school? It must've been hard for her to digest all that information in one day. Byunghun cheered her up by making fun of himself, but that of course isn't enough.

I don't understand her feelings because I never got to experience that, but I might do almost the exact same thing if I were on her shoes. To know that there's no hope of you getting your voice back, especially if you love singing is very harsh. But it's not wrong to be hoping that there's still hope right? :D

And I love Byunghun and his dad's relationship. They're like, very close, but Mr. Lee still have the father side of him. He worried and scolded Byunghun, but not that harsh kind of scolding.
And Mr. Lee didn't go all 'oh how did it go son did you kiss her yet' and tease Byunghun either, like in those typical romcom fics. Honestly, I hate that kind of fictional parents most. Like, come on.....

In midst of the negativity of the news, at least there's a little good in it (I tend to view things in a positive way haha). Byunghun and Hajin's friendship have gotten deeper, thanks to that night. Right now, I don't wish for them to end up together quickly, I still want some of the cute friendship of theirs progressing into something more slowly, hahahahah

Anyways, thanks for the update! I really enjoyed it:3
Thekpopobsessor
#3
Chapter 6: Tao XD kekeke so cute~
derpychannie
#4
Chapter 3: loving this story alreadyyyy <33

tbh it kinda makes me sad that such a sweet girl like ha jin is actually mute ;_;
byunghun is cute, in this story, and i like that :3

well even though this relationship between byunghun and ha jin is still a new lovely friendship, i hope in the end it grows into something more lololol cause that's what i am expecting x)
dolittle123
#5
Chapter 6: Ha Jin is such a sweet girl. :33
MayAndJune
#6
Chapter 5: OMG you updated! It's been a while and sometimes I wonder where's the newest update. lol Byunghun must be in some kind of dilemma since Hajin likes Myungsoo and he likes her too.

Uncurable? Officially disabled? Poor Hajin. Not only she lost her father in the accident, she also lost her voice. It must be hard for her since even Byunghyun (and I) was surprised by the letter. Hajin is officially mute and her chance of speaking again is less than usual.

Byunghun is nice enough to take Hajin home, and he even got to sleep under one roof (not one room, though....) with her. Score one for Byunghun lol! (since I doubt Myungsoo ever slept over Hajin's house...)

And since your friend mentioned it, I realized that Byunghun is...... a teeny weeny bit of..... gay. But I love is personality, which means..... I like gay guys? WHAT. Hahahahah, just kidding, by the way. Byunghun has traits that most men don't have, and it's great. Girls might swoon over him if he used it without sounding gay. LOLOL sorry Byunghun. Besides he is very sensitive because of something right? Plus he likes Hajin which makes him pretty much straight lol

Poor the girl whose father was shot in front of her eyes! Plus she is about my age now, I feel sad for her. It must be hard when one second you're talking to your dad and the next second he laid dead before your eyes. Bet the crazy citizen is jailed...... for life I hope. Besides, I thought it wasn't legal to own a gun? (from where I come from though)
Marianations #7
Chapter 4: Obrigada pelo capítulo ! Nós as duas aqui a falarmos de coisas quando eu devia estar a comentar a tua história HUL !
Esse rapazolas apaixonado... rapaz, rapaz... temos que sofrer ás vezes, sabias ? As coisas não podem ser sempre como nós queremos, darling.

Ó meu Deus pareço louca a comentar em português misturado com inglês XD

Obrigadaaaaaaaa !!!
Marianations #8
Ó caraças. Eu sei que devia ter comentado antes mas bem T.T
Estes dois tão a ficar mais e mais próximos cada dia ! São totalmente adoráveis, que posso dizer ? Mesmo assim, é uma pena que ela seja muda. Deveria ter outra oportunidade, pobre desgraçada !
E a mãe dele... T.T

Pobre mulher, ainda a sofrer...


Obrigada !
MayAndJune
#9
I am smiling throughout the last 2 chapters of this fanfic (since the first one is kind of an introduction(?) to the story). I actually found out this story when a reader promoted this fanfic on her blog post. So not regretting on clicking the link to this fic lol

I love the relation of Hajin and Byunghun, though it's just been 3 chapters and the closest they got is at the park when Hajin confronted Byunghun. Hajin seems to be a very beautiful girl, inside and out & Byunghun seems to be drawn by her. You did a great job in writing this fanfic, and I'm sure you'll do as great (or even better?) for the upcoming chapters.

You made me fell in love with this fanfic hahaha great job on that, especially I'm not a Teen Top fan. At all. :x and I voted too haha, I knew I just had to give my vote as soon as I finished readin the 3 chapters
caramelfrappucino
#10
Chapter 3: This story is soooo good! :D
Update soon please author nim~